Ah yes, a sonnet. I really enjoyed this one. You did a really good job conveying Narcissa’s emotions here. You also really seem to have to meter down, which I personally find next to impossible for this kind of poem. I consider that an accomplishment in and of itself. I liked the recurring lines, or portions of lines, throughout this poem. It helps tie the whole thing together nicely and also added to the impact. I thought you did well there. The only real constructive comment I can think of would have been no more than a matter of opinion/interpretation. So, it isn’t worth including. Overall, very nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks Vader, your opinions and insights are always appreciated.