An interesting story, simplistically written, with some great detail about the bracelet and its history.
There's a lot of room to develop the characters further and also to discover more about the dark powers of the bracelet. Maybe a one shot detailing the downfall of Stephanie's mother or the bracelets other victims.
I'd point out, that if we're paying attention to Britishness that it should be grey not gray.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really should keep in mind the grey/gray thing for future reference.
^.^ Yay! I get such love!
Anyway, this fic was awesome. Touching. Don't know why I didn't see the whole "Draco-is-her-dad" thing coming, though. (Maybe cos that's not how i usually think of Draco ;) )
I really liked this one. It was unexpected. But good. I liked Borgin's moment of actually feeling something. Brief, but still significant. And then thinking about Draco's fiancee after she got the bracelet.. I could cry. I can only hope our lovely Stephanie Malfoy can help clear out that house of evil artifacts to the best of her ability. Yay rebellion!
Peace, man, and I'll have chap 4 beta'ed for you on Monday, k?
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I did create our joint penname. So I hope to get A Rat's Tale posted under Lily_n_Draco by the end of the week, maybe.