Reviews For Alive Once More
Reviewer: Hello12345
Date: 04/27/06 2:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well, it certainly wasn't bad! I think there's lots of room for development of these two very complex characters you've chosen. I also think its good to have a plot as well as a romance...I can see the Wolfsbane Potion becoming a greater part of the story.

Ps: Paragraph 1: Ron Weasley, not Weasely

Author's Response: wow thanks!!! im so excited because you reviewed!!! i have the story done already but i will work on it more and i will make it have more depth. Thank you so much!!! P.S. thanks for correcting me!!! im gonna go change it right now!! -Pam

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