I like this, it has potential to become a lovely story. Nice introduction of the characters, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thank you!rnhopefully the new chapter will be up soon!rn:)
Wow, it's amazing, you've got to the heart of Severus Snape! I knew there had to be one in there somewhere. This first chapter was great, it tells the reader a little, but but keeps them guessing. I think the way Hermione and Severus feel about the reunion makes alot of sense and bringind Dumbledore's name in was a nice touch too. Alot of anniversaries are like that I think, most people just show up to see old friends or for the food, either that or everyone's miserable and it's one huge memorial service. I don't see why it can't be a mix, share memories of those lost etc. Someone once said to me that when remembering a lost loved one, you should do something they would've liked, or that you would do together. Wonder if they'd manage to get Hermione up on a broom chasing a snitch? Sorry, thought i was going off track a bit so decided to come back. Anyway, there are so many directions this fic could go in and I can't wait to see which. Write more soon, please!
Excellent start! Please keep up the story, I'm dying to know what happens next!
another chaoter is URGENTLY needed before i become insane! it's wonderful1 keep going!
Author's Response: thank you so much!! I'm working on a new chapter and will update soon! Pam
oh my GODric gryffindor that chapter was ausome keep up the good work !! :-)
It was great. The loss of some of the main charachters of the books was disapointing but I think you could still make a great storry out of it. Who knows though because I love all the Hermione/Severus stories
It's an an interesting beginning to what promises to be a captivating story. Keep up the good work!
This was an interesting first chapter, I would read more :)... I want to know what they talk about and how they end up together :).
I enjoyed the banter between Hermione and Snape here. The idea is a good one and I like your idea of keeping it a romantic story. Nice job.
I really like this. It would e great if you keep Snape quite stern and serious even though he's falling in love with Hermione, and not make him all lovey dovey
I enjoyed reading that...I'd like to see more! You don't have to make it deep, just add to it as soon as you can. Your interpretation of Snape is interesting.
i really hope you keep writing its really good
that was really good, but really short. please update soon. please?
Its very nice, i dont see what you have to be worried about.
i like it! great start, i especially like the way you describe what they are thinking.
Hey this is good for your first fic, bit short but good. I cant help but wonder what Snap's intentions are, please keep writing!
Hey, Nostalgic128 this is of to a very good start. it sounds like you have a promising story to follow and for that i wish you good luck. can't wait to read more of your work soon.
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Are u going to Submit the next chapter or what....im really curious to see were this goes. Great job so far.
I'm so happy that you didn't make Snape a bad guy. It was a really good story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, DarkAngel92! I'm really glad you liked it. However, i do not know if i should make it a really deep story. The way it is now is that its just a romantic story, not very long, not really that deep. I think i am just going to leave it the way it is, with mostly romance. But thank you so much for reviewing! -Pam
its lovely and i cant wait untill you submit the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm going to submit soon, hopefully, because my story is completed. I'm just editing it and stuff. I'm so glad you liked it!!! -Pam
