I like your idea. Sometimes people really have to see themselves from beside to understand. I love to read about the Mirror of Erised, it's one of my favourite magical objects. And I've always known Remus would make a good psychologist. ;)
In the words of Athena " Justice, or revenge"? Love this one shot, though I for one would do it cuz thats really the only way they will ever stop.
It's an OK story now... Please come back to it in a few months and I think you'll be able to make it much better! In other words, you've got a great idea here, using the Mirror of Erised to help Harry come to grips with his conflicting needs (justice vs being with those he loves). You just need to come back later and polish the Mirror!
Author's Response: Haha, the story is actually a couple months old. I was just too lazy to fix it up, because just by looking at it I could tell that in order to fix it up I'd have to practically re-write the whole thing, which I really didn't want to do. Thanks for reading, though!
hm... don't really know what to say about this. nice piece of work, but not so sure about the end.
Author's Response: Eee, it is a little shaky, isn't it? Ah well. Someday I'll come back and fix it up. Thanks for the review! :)
omg.... that made me a bit teary.. awe.. i love this story! thnx for making my day! =)
Author's Response: You're welcome, I'm glad you liked it!