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Reviews For From Fen to Glen

Name: mulligas (Signed) · Date: 09/17/09 1:21 · For: Birth
Its ironic that Salazar Slytherin would be a muggleborn.

Name: CakeorDeath (Signed) · Date: 11/28/07 11:27 · For: Birth
This is so good! Really atmospheric! *adds to favourites*

Name: Mystery Reviewer (Anonymous) · Date: 03/03/07 13:10 · For: Men of Magic
You are an incredible author...please finish this story! It is my favorite of yours.

Name: PotterPunk (Signed) · Date: 02/27/07 20:40 · For: Prologue
I know it goes w/o saying but you truly are one of the best writers on this board. Your use of language is amazing and really keeps me into the story.

Please update soon!

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 01/29/07 22:25 · For: Men of Magic
Hmmmm, interesting. Now all we need is Helga and we have everyone! I have to say that your story is keeping me intrigued. Cyns

Author's Response: Helga is a bit slow to be introduced, but I definately have plans for her soon. Glad you're still reading. :-)

Name: SiriuslyMental (Signed) · Date: 01/29/07 22:02 · For: Men of Magic
Huzzah! I was so excited to se an update at last! This chapter was wonderful, as usual. I like the introduction of Godric and the originality of the plot in all of this. So, does Salazar see Rowena before she gets back to the camp?

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. ;-) Glad you're still reading. I know it's been awhile since the last update, and thank you for the review!

Name: Seggie1313 (Signed) · Date: 12/27/06 17:55 · For: Birth
I just thought now would be as good a time as any to say you are an excellent writer. I love your descriptions and such. Thanks for keeping me interested. :]

Author's Response: And thank you for the lovely review. I'm going to try to get a new chapter up soon.

Name: razorMC (Signed) · Date: 12/25/06 5:02 · For: King of the Castle
If writing is like painting, then Magical Maeve is Da Vinci

Author's Response: *blushes like mad* Thank you so much!

Name: samybear (Signed) · Date: 12/14/06 20:39 · For: King of the Castle
I'm very intrigued by this story & I'm sad there isn't more ... I like the way you've brought everything together. I hope you haven't given up on this one.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. No, haven't given up; this story has just been resting. ;-)

Name: SiriuslyMental (Signed) · Date: 11/29/06 14:52 · For: King of the Castle
Please, please update this! I've been waiting ages, and it's so unbelievably good! Very original take.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I will udpate soon. :-)

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/25/06 0:02 · For: King of the Castle
He had better go! I will be VERY vexed with him if he doesn't. Nonetheless, a very good chapter! :)
One, itty-bitty typo, "...with a stifled giggled she turned and disappeared into the pantry..."
Shouldn't that be "giggle" and not "giggled"?
I am absolutely infatuated with this story and can't wait until the update!
Leaving us with a cliffhanger, tsk tsk, not very nice, :P

Author's Response: Thanks, Julia. Hopefully the Secret Santa will have made up for the cliffhanger... and I will update!

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 23:56 · For: The First Spark
Mmm... I see why Rowena is the way she is. There were no problems with this chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed the village woman's reaction to their "spark of magic."
Well done!

Author's Response: Glad the chapter was trouble free. :-) Thanks for the review.

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 23:50 · For: Spinning Gold
Oh, my! That was beautiful... at the end, um... about Rowena. It was perfect. You really have researched this extensively, haven't you?
Just one tiny little typo: "Would that, he though with an inhibited snort."
Shouldn't it be he "thought"?
Other than that... flawless.

Author's Response: I hate though and thought. Word should be able to read my mind and change them accordingly. ;-) The only research I did for this was for the first chapter - the rest is relying on memory of history lessons. Thanks again for the review!

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 23:42 · For: Re-birth
Another marvelous chapter! At first I wondered why his "master" was suddenly so cruel ... and then I saw that his name was Malfoi! Marvelous job at incorporating everyone's favorite evil family, :).
There was only one slight bit of syntax that I disagreed with, "...who [was] yet to give the young boy his name."
Should this be "...who had yet to give the young boy his name." ?
Of course, I suppose it could be written the way you had it.
That was the only thing I noticed, though. I really love this story; it's unique and riveting!

Author's Response: Thank you. And I'm glad you're dropping in concrit. I'll edit in the alterations.

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 23:34 · For: Birth
My, my... what an ambitious young boy!
There was only one point during this marvelous chapter, where I stumbled slightly over the words, "...with a brain far advanced from that of a normal five-year-old."
I struggled a bit with 'from,' but this is quite correct.
I do not presume to know more about this... I was just informing you of the impression I received.
I felt it should have been written, "...with a brain far more advanced than that of a normal five-year-old." However, your way is absolutely fine.
I truly am enjoying this story! :)

Author's Response: *nods* You're right. That does read awkwardly. *adds to list of edits* *considers grabbing Julia for some beta work*

Name: Celestial Melody (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 23:22 · For: Prologue
What a lovely chapter. You are a wonderful writer.
I particularly enjoyed this: "Memories confused the mind, befuddled the senses." It seems to be an endearing Slytherin sentiment. Maybe it's an unofficial House motto? :)
This was flawless; a joy to read!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 08/20/06 18:46 · For: King of the Castle
Poor Rowena, I hope that no harm comes to her since Salazar didn't meet her. I wonder how he will get out of marrying Isabelle, or even if he will. Some very interesting questions are starting to come to mind. I look forward to see what is next.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully I'll answer some of those questions soon!

Name: snowy_owl_92 (Signed) · Date: 08/18/06 11:38 · For: King of the Castle
oh yay! i'm the first to review! this story is very interesting. when does helga come into the story?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As for Helga, you'll have to wait and see. ;-)

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 08/15/06 9:37 · For: The First Spark
You have really brought a lot of questions in about Rowena and her family! It is getting to be very interesting. I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working hard at it now so expect an update soon. :-)

Name: Insecurity (Signed) · Date: 08/13/06 17:42 · For: Spinning Gold
*leaves silly little review*

You need to write more of this!
Author's Response: I'm writing, I'm writing.


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