Reviews For Back to You
Reviewer: Fairydust123
Date: 07/14/07 14:01
Chapter: Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1)

This story is pretty good! Of course I can't entirely be sure of that until it's finished, if you get my drift! lol. I really like it so far and can't wait for the next chapter so please be quick!! Good luck on the next chapters!

Reviewer: pheonixfire28
Date: 06/28/07 18:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: Muggle Phrases and Troubled Glances

that was a good story and you must update fast

Reviewer: Servantofthedarklord
Date: 04/03/07 19:08
Chapter: Chapter 2: Muggle Phrases and Troubled Glances

Firstly; I'm giving you feed back: Good story and I like the way it is written, not to much fluff but a bit of mystery. Secoundly; I gave you feed back now I want more story. (Don't mess with me either, the pen name is what it is 'cause I'm that evil ;) )

Reviewer: getthepointe1
Date: 12/20/06 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 2: Muggle Phrases and Troubled Glances

I love it... but isn't there anymore??

Reviewer: dizzyblackjew
Date: 11/12/06 0:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Muggle Phrases and Troubled Glances

It's good enough, but when r u getting 2 the Draco/ Ginny snog?

Reviewer: brooklyn_witch108
Date: 10/28/06 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 2: Muggle Phrases and Troubled Glances

i like the story line, ur a good writer but how about some passion???

Reviewer: bxbronxbabii34
Date: 07/30/06 18:54
Chapter: Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1)

Im a little confused with this one, I mean who is HIm?

Reviewer: LovelyMuggle
Date: 07/21/06 13:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

I really liked your story, but i didn't get why she was crying.

Reviewer: DyNamiTe
Date: 07/03/06 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

great story, not much of a plot yet, but its early yet hope to see more chapters

Reviewer: anira4
Date: 06/13/06 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

LOVE IT!!! ... you are very good,hope you update soon!

Reviewer: fire_princess
Date: 06/08/06 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until I read the nex chapter.

Reviewer: fire_princess
Date: 06/08/06 16:04
Chapter: Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1)

Why did you say that the prolouge was weird? I think that it was pretty cool. a little tiny bit confusing, but cool.

Reviewer: Kookie
Date: 06/04/06 19:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

That was a good chapter, you should definatly make another chap.

Reviewer: whos_rab
Date: 05/25/06 22:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

Hmm..this is an interesting fic. I love the prologue, I wonder what happened four months ago that's made her so..vacant. And I'm lmao at Ron's reaction to Ginny's outfit. He's hilarious. But in that last paragraph in ch.1 you used the word perfect so many times, lol.

Reviewer: softballplayer
Date: 05/18/06 11:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

Wow!!! That was really good writing!!! I really enjoyed that story. I really hope that you are planning on making more.

Reviewer: LiveLaughLove
Date: 05/11/06 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

i love it, keep going PLEASE!

Reviewer: tu_nena_slytherin2
Date: 05/06/06 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

can u please write mooreee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: tu_nena_slytherin2
Date: 05/06/06 18:11
Chapter: Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1)

i love it ,,, its so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u try to imaginate what has happened to her

Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 04/29/06 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: If Ever a Day was Perfect

Yay, I'm first to review! =D Nice fic, this is! I think you're portraying Ginny really well (both in the prologue and in this chapter). Your writing is amazing, you can really understand the way Ginny's feeling. There were no spelling errors, but the grammar and phrasing was a bit strange in some places, you may want to take an extra look at that. Anyways, this story is really interesting, I want to see where it's going! Please update! =)

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 04/24/06 17:12
Chapter: Prologue: Dying on the Inside (Part 1)

A nice start. I like the way you incorporated Harry's feelings for her. I like also your last paragraph -- it sounds just right, though I don't know exactly how.

I also like how she knows she's changed. It's harsh and bitter, but not terribly so.

The light that had been there not but four months ago.
This line was a bit odd; I think you need to remove the "not". I see what you meant, but it should come more like: "The light had been there but four months ago." It's a good line.

I'm interested to see how Ginny's story unfolds!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, and the correction, I really do appreciate it! :o) I'll be posting more soon, I promise!

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