Reviews For Pick Up the Pieces
Reviewer: HrryPttrIzMyLife
Date: 02/06/08 18:00
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces


Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/06/07 12:58
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

oops i forgot to say
ron has blue eyes not green

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 12/06/07 12:58
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces


Reviewer: WannaBeMrsRonWeasly
Date: 06/01/06 13:38
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

Aww, I'm crying, that was so sweet.

Very well written. You captured the emotions of Ron and Hermione very well. Not your average fic, but great all the same. Did you chose the name Victoria because she (Hermione) realised her love for Ron after she broke up with Vicktor?

You chose a perfect song for the plotline, it fits nicely. Good job!

Reviewer: megsan_88
Date: 05/10/06 12:38
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

awwwwwwwwww :)
major adorable-ness!
i love it times a bajillion and three!

Reviewer: WinterMistNymph
Date: 05/06/06 5:13
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

awwww! This is one of my favorite stories Ive read. I loved it just enough Fluff in it! Very well Written. Kudos!

Reviewer: pinkpPotter
Date: 04/29/06 17:39
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

I really loved this one! Very well written. = )

Reviewer: mAgic62442
Date: 04/28/06 17:42
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

oooohh!!! very nice! luv it! nice ending!!!

Reviewer: Pirate_Alohomora
Date: 04/27/06 3:30
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

I stopped reading after the word "pregnant". Sorry, I was slightly disgusted. Great story up until that point.

Author's Response: Um... okay. You have the right to your own feelings/opinion, but may I ask if there is a particular reason as to why? Is it the fact they weren't married first? Because it's really no secret that in the world of HP, they aren't exactly innocent. Things do turn out happily-ever-after though in the end, if you had gotten that far.

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 04/26/06 2:42
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

Ron has blue eyes. BLUE! But otherwise it was a good story. I just got a little buit annoyed about you saying they were green.!!!! Harrys eyes are green!!!!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/21/06 22:03
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

Aww completely adorable! Perfectly picked times for the little snapshots! Nice work!!!

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you!

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 04/21/06 20:17
Chapter: Pick Up the Pieces

Aw, how sweet! I like the Krum-dumping-Hermione bit, it's very original. I like that Ron saves her after that, that it's not the usual Ron-is-thick story. He's actually got feelings and a brain! Wow!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, for some reason I couldn't get this plot out of my head when I was listening to this song... Thanks again for the review!

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