that was good. are ou thinking of writing more? i hope you do.
Really enjoying it- hope there's more to follow. Some nice twists, smoothly written. :)
O M G. . . .I really want to keep reading, but I think this is the last chapter. . . I hope I remember this in the next few weeks for when you update. . . yeah. So--a bit of fuel--it was GREAT. But you already knew that. Most people do when they write a great story. So--er--continue it. And um, keep it real--yo.
oh yeah. It's good. I'm no Ebert, but I can tell when a story's getting good. . . The whole Ginny-Tonks thing, yeah. And that fact that you can relate the way Tonks felt about Cynthia to the way Ginny feels about Tonks. . . I guess I'll just have to keep reading to see where this is going. . . Good Job-- fizzle homie--G. . . (sorry I couldn't resist)
wow. It's usual typical slash. It's written quite well, actually--I am going to read chapter 2 now and can tell you more about it then. Good so far, however, it seems that EVERYONE is quite lesbian. Are they all going to have a happy lesbian party or something? Well, I suppose we'll see. . .
I really like the depth with which you portray the relationships between the girls.
am i wierd or are u portraying tonks as a lesbian?
That is just disgusting and wrong and too graphic. I'm sorry, but that was just...DIRTY. I can't believe you'd actually put that picture in our heads. You are an excellent writer, and I have no problem with gay people, but that was just too graphic for me. Sorry.
That is just disgusting and wrong and too graphic. I'm sorry, but that was just...DIRTY. I can't believe you'd actually put that picture in our heads. You are an excellent writer, and I have no problem with gay people, but that was just too graphic for me. Sorry.
Author's Response: Wow, if you think THIS is graphic, you would never be able to handle one of my deeper SSP stories. This is fluff by comparrison.
I really love the first chapter! I can't wait for the second one! Most SSP stories just don't quite fit with the books, but your's certainly does!
I can tell that this is going to be a wonderful story. It was recommended to me by the mod who validated it. And boy was she right!
So many SSP fics base themselves on lust and it's so nice to see one where there is genuine feeling involved.
You've created a wonderful air of romance and we can sense the deep emotion between the two girls.
Keep up the good work!
