Ok that was good I enjoyed this chapter!
hmmmm!So is it Tonks and Cyn that are going out
Great chapter. I think I like the 2nd the best so far though. Keep it up. It's a great story. I like it all.
Great 2nd chapter. I loved it more than the first. Keep it up.
Good chapter. Can't wait to read the others. I write femmeslash myself. Good stuff, good stuff. Keep up the great work.
aww Ginny/Hermione are so damn cute together!!!
wow that last paragraph was a great cliff hanger!!!
I swear that's the sweetest story I have read on this site so far. It was really well-written. Your characterisation of Tonks was excellent. I also kind of had the feeling that Tonks might be a lesbian before the whole Remus thing. She reminds me a bit of myself, and I kept thinking that she, like me, is the kind of person who likes to surround herself with beautiful girls.
You know, I wonder what house Tonks was in... Wish JKR would tell us.
Ginny is very sweet in this. Her reaction was very believable, and it's a very Ginny way to act when she has a crush. She's super-cute. Hermione was also well-written. I can see it. I can see Hermione at least wanting to experiment. And you managed to keep her very in character when she was talking to Ginny at the end.
All in all, great fic. I'm so glad I took the time to read it! :)
This was such a great fic! I loved it. Sweet, biut sort of sad. You're such a great writer! I hope you write more fics like this :-D
it would be a lot better if you did't' have tonks as a lesbian
This is going really well, i really look forward to reading more! best of luck if you choose to continue this
Omgs that was great! When is the next chapter? :D
Hmmm... I actually like this fic a lot. It's my first femme-slash and it seems to be a lesbian free-for-all, but i enjoy it all the same. Will you update?
That is awesome poor Ginny she sounds crushed!! Update soon
I hate you, you know that? *snickers* You write such good stuff, and leave me hanging?! Write more! Write faster! Your descriptions are enthralling, your situations are exciting, and your ties of canon situations to your own plots are intruigingly sensible! Please, hurry up and post the fourth chapter already. 'Mione.Cho simply pwns. And I'm just chuckling trying to imagine Tonks' reaction to Ginny's confessions. *snicker* You really are quite good with words. I think I'll add you as a favourite. *adds* There you go, loffy.
-HDWest
I really really liked it. I love the whole twist with Hermione and Cho. That was really clever. You have to write more!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!
um..................not a big femmeslash person...i was just curious, but u did a fabuloso job in explaining what could happen.
sweetly done,
~narcissa
