This was a wonderful poem! You have talent in poetry.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Love this!
It is a really good poem.
10/10
Samuri Rose
Author's Response: Thanks!
This is a really great Neville poem. I love Neville (he is the only fictional character I can see myself spending the rest of my life with) and you portrayed him in this poem well. I also enjoyed the snappy rythym and great rhyme of this poem. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought I portrayed him well. he doesn't get enough credit in the books, in my opinion, so that gives us fanfic writers a little room to explore. Thanks for the review!HermyRox12
i loved how you portrayed neville as like a reject in the beginning then in the end he actually had a chance to be something great i loved it
Author's Response: Thanks! It was fun writing him like that. Glad you loved it. HermyRox12