Reviews For In Retrospect.
Reviewer: ccsahplvr1
Date: 12/26/06 12:18
Chapter: Consolidation

I've always wondered what it was like for them back at school. And this is exactly what I hoped it would be like. I love your stories Daughter of Light, and Severed Souls, they are my favorite stories on here. And now I love this one too. I'm really looking forward to this updating one day.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will try to update this one. It's one of the smaller ficlets that's been neglected of late.

Reviewer: Poultrygeist99
Date: 04/20/06 9:00
Chapter: Consolidation

Yay! *claps hands in glee* Very nicely written.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 04/19/06 14:03
Chapter: The Scent of Magic

It is very interesting to see how Maeve's meeting of Severus. I guess she had been talking to Lily already. That is my guess, since she knew who Snape was. I've come to really like your stories of Maeve and Severus. :) Thanks for another one!

Author's Response: And thank you for the constant support via your reviews. This was quiet a tough one, writing the meeting.

Reviewer: Poultrygeist99
Date: 04/19/06 9:25
Chapter: The Scent of Magic

Severus was only too happy to take advantage of the inclement weather and enjoy the luxury of taking a walk unfettered by idiots attempting to irritate him. I love this sentence. It is wonderfully in-character.

He had forgotten his homework, forgotten Hogwarts, forgotten everything. Forgotten, even, that moments like this did not really happen. And yet, it was happening.*giggles* I love this! I love this feeling! Of the world dropping away while you are suddenly immersed in the experience of a moment! Delightful!

Poor Severus with his rough sheets! I would think that Slytherin House could do better than that! And grumping about frivolous girls. I really enjoyed this piece.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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