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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/16/16 16:32 · For: Allies
I really liked this chapter. So Lily ended up fixing Sirius and altering his memory. I was thinking of later when Maeve finds out Lily was actually her sister. I didn't find Severus' romantic comments at the end particularly Snape-like but they worked here. I kind of like to see him a little more vulnerable and softer with the ladies.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 06/03/16 17:45 · For: Enemies
I wonder what Lily did to Sirius. I can see why Lily and James took a while to get together.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/25/16 20:49 · For: Friendships
I wish Severus and Maeve would get together. They both need a friend. There always has to be some family or political problem that interferes in relationships.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/25/16 17:13 · For: Consolidation
Maeve does kind of put forth the view that she can read minds. I've noticed with family members or friends that sometimes they and I will come up with the same thought at the same time--like we know what the other's thinking. Maybe that's what Severus and Maeve are doing.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 05/25/16 12:23 · For: The Scent of Magic
You'd think the Gryffindors would have way better manners. Maybe there is such a thing as spoiled rich kids. Or were they just going through their awful teenage years?

Name: ccsahplvr1 (Signed) · Date: 12/26/06 12:18 · For: Consolidation
I've always wondered what it was like for them back at school. And this is exactly what I hoped it would be like. I love your stories Daughter of Light, and Severed Souls, they are my favorite stories on here. And now I love this one too. I'm really looking forward to this updating one day.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will try to update this one. It's one of the smaller ficlets that's been neglected of late.

Name: Poultrygeist99 (Signed) · Date: 04/20/06 9:00 · For: Consolidation
Yay! *claps hands in glee* Very nicely written.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: Cheshlin (Signed) · Date: 04/19/06 14:03 · For: The Scent of Magic
It is very interesting to see how Maeve's meeting of Severus. I guess she had been talking to Lily already. That is my guess, since she knew who Snape was. I've come to really like your stories of Maeve and Severus. :) Thanks for another one!

Author's Response: And thank you for the constant support via your reviews. This was quiet a tough one, writing the meeting.

Name: Poultrygeist99 (Signed) · Date: 04/19/06 9:25 · For: The Scent of Magic
Severus was only too happy to take advantage of the inclement weather and enjoy the luxury of taking a walk unfettered by idiots attempting to irritate him. I love this sentence. It is wonderfully in-character.

He had forgotten his homework, forgotten Hogwarts, forgotten everything. Forgotten, even, that moments like this did not really happen. And yet, it was happening.*giggles* I love this! I love this feeling! Of the world dropping away while you are suddenly immersed in the experience of a moment! Delightful!

Poor Severus with his rough sheets! I would think that Slytherin House could do better than that! And grumping about frivolous girls. I really enjoyed this piece.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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