Another story by MoonysMistress that i love and will go in my favorites!
That was great. You're one of my favorite (If not my definate favorite) fanfic authors. Keep doing what you're doing!!!
P.S. I like how you incorporate songs into your stories. Bloody Brilliant!
Author's Response: *blush* Aww, thanks! And the idea of song incorporation is so not mine. I stole the idea of songfic from someone else (dunno who, but I wish I could give credit where credit is due). Thanks again! P.S.: I miss Sirius too. :(
I can honestly say this is one of the best HP poems I've ever read. My favorite part:
"a man now
initiated with a man's sorrow
but a boy
a boy who's been abandoned once more
because of me."
beautiful. I also really liked how you refer to the prophecy as a "bauble"... kind of underscores the senselessness of the whole situation. Excellent job.
Author's Response: This is sort of random, but I love it when people find stuff in poems that the author didn't even know was there. Your bauble observation is a really excellent one, even though I never thought of it that way. Still....ha, now my poem is a metaphor! My teachers always nag me about that. *rambling* Thanks very much for the review...and the hidden meaning. :)