Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/21/06 19:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Another story by MoonysMistress that i love and will go in my favorites!

Reviewer: I_Miss_Sirius
Date: 07/05/06 22:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was great. You're one of my favorite (If not my definate favorite) fanfic authors. Keep doing what you're doing!!!

P.S. I like how you incorporate songs into your stories. Bloody Brilliant!

Author's Response: *blush* Aww, thanks! And the idea of song incorporation is so not mine. I stole the idea of songfic from someone else (dunno who, but I wish I could give credit where credit is due). Thanks again! P.S.: I miss Sirius too. :(

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 04/19/06 21:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can honestly say this is one of the best HP poems I've ever read. My favorite part:
"a man now
initiated with a man's sorrow
but a boy
a boy who's been abandoned once more
because of me."
beautiful. I also really liked how you refer to the prophecy as a "bauble"... kind of underscores the senselessness of the whole situation. Excellent job.

Author's Response: This is sort of random, but I love it when people find stuff in poems that the author didn't even know was there. Your bauble observation is a really excellent one, even though I never thought of it that way. Still....ha, now my poem is a metaphor! My teachers always nag me about that. *rambling* Thanks very much for the review...and the hidden meaning. :)

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