Aw, that was nice. A bit intense in the beginning and still intense in the end but it had a nice ending to the chapter. good job.
I really don't know how to review this chapter, I liked it, but I just can't describe what I like about it. Really everything, I really liked how concerned Snape was.
Woah, Hermione had a freak out there didn't she? Well I hope she's alright. Good chapter, kept me on the edge of my seat.
another good chapter, well it's one-thirty and i have to go to bed. night.
Aww... that was nice, emotional but nice.
That was a bastardly move he made there. I can't guess the fave line. and the fic is completed so chapter four is well, here. good chapter, me likey.
Snape's being a bit of an arse. Still loving the story though. good chapter.
I like this. Hermione is just very Hermione and I love it!
I loved it, especially the reason to her inner termoil! (I spelled thet wrong, didn't I?)
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure it's 'turmoil' but who cares? Thanks so much for reading and enjoying!
This is the best HG/SS fic I have ever read. You did a greatjob with it. I will have to read any other storys I find by you.
Author's Response: I'm incredibly flattered. I hope you enjoy any others you read as much as you enjoyed this!
Fantastc story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop!!! I look forward to reading others that you have written.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm looking forward to reviews!
well written with the exception of the final line..."as he touched her lips to her and-" his lips, i believe, not her
Author's Response: *headesk* I can't believe as many people have read this (not the least of all myself, my beta, the various mods and---*headesk repeatedly*) and that not a single person caught that mistake. Thank you so much. It's already been corrected. And, as always, thanks for reading and reviewing!
That was..errrr........INTRESTING to say the lest, yes I loved it, I dont uselly read THIS kinda stuff, but..it got me thinking :D
WP!
xxx
Author's Response: Thinking is always good! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Normally I would think that Hermione and Severus having a relationship would be disgusting, but I really enjoyed it.
Good job.
Author's Response:
If you would normally think that, why would read this fic in the first place? <.<
Thanks for reading and enjoying!
thank you
Author's Response: You're welcome
Just.. brillance. really! j'adore.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thrilled to hear it!
