Reviewer: phantasmagorist
Date: 02/12/08 20:11
Chapter: Nature's Course

"A/N: *runs to hide*"
Good call. ;)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 11:15
Chapter: Nature's Mercy

'...think, worry, worry, think,...' LOL

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 11:09
Chapter: Nature's Pain

dreamless sleep draught?

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 10:59
Chapter: Nature's Magic

Very interesting. =)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 9:43
Chapter: Nature's Warning

' resort to elemental, childlike and unconscious magic so powerful even the Anti-Apparation wards on the grounds and castle do nothing...' Damn, she is one powerful witch.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 9:33
Chapter: Nature's Course

Argh, don't tell me you are going to turn this into another rape scene, tsk tsk tsk.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 9:32
Chapter: Nature's Course

Argh, don't tell you are going to turn this into another rape scene, tsk tsk tsk.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 9:16
Chapter: Nature's Mission

I'm hoping that the next chapter will have the good professor inform our gal the extent of his regard for her.

Well written, I'm enjoying the story so far.


Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 02/04/08 9:00
Chapter: Nature's Purpose

Hmm, I'm wondering if there isn't a spell in use, but just urges that he wasn't aware he had coming to the surface. You never know. ;-)

Reviewer: Angel Feathers
Date: 02/02/08 4:03
Chapter: Epilogue

Love it!
*runs to find the prequels*

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 02/01/08 1:23
Chapter: Epilogue


Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 02/01/08 1:15
Chapter: Nature's Mercy

I think it is "she had woken" at the beginning, not "waken"

Reviewer: lily_green
Date: 11/17/07 2:33
Chapter: Nature's Mission

I am not a nice man?

Author's Response: Did you think he was?

Reviewer: ev_snape
Date: 10/29/07 16:45
Chapter: Nature's Purpose

I appreciate the creative ideas of the story, however you change from first to third person character and "facts" of the story contradict themselves. Try reading the story outloud so you can hear the descrepencies.

Author's Response: I do have an excellent beta reader, who is (incidentally) a moderator, so I trust that any discrepancies at this point are merely my personal style which she may have tried to beat out of me and could not. I hope you excuse them. The change in POV was important for the two characters, and I apologize that it is crazy headache inducing in the last chapter; couldn't be helped. Thank you, though.

Reviewer: Seventh
Date: 09/15/07 10:53
Chapter: Epilogue

Ruddy amazing! All so weird - the potion and such, and yet it was so, what's the word... I wish to give you a word but I can't... just can't think of a word... let that be your plausage! You rendered me wordless!

Author's Response:
Speechless is at least one of the words you're looking for, I think. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 08/30/07 3:52
Chapter: Epilogue

OMG I loved this every last bit of it, I think my cuz almost killed me for staying up till five in the morning reading this one, I can't wait to go back and read Come Hell and then High water.....-smiles!- By far one of my Fav Snape/Hermione ones! if i donn't stop soon this will turn into a rant. Ciao!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, again! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 08/30/07 2:44
Chapter: Nature's Mission

Even thou chapt. four is through i thought i would guess for the fun of it. before moving on to the next capt. "Of course. Ten points from Slytherin for their offensive Head of House" Thats my guess. Ciao!

Author's Response: Actually, it's the line about Ron and pronouns, if I remember correctly, but thanks for reading and guessing anyway!

Reviewer: simplyironic
Date: 08/24/07 1:00
Chapter: Epilogue

That was great, I really enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 08/21/07 11:19
Chapter: Epilogue

I really liked this. You're a really good writer, and I say that not just because I loved this story, but because not everyone knows how to deal with the topic of rape. A lot of people will just be very blunt and offensive with it but you were fairly delicate, you let us know that what happened to her was horrible and wrong but you didn't make us cringe with disgust. And also a lot of writers would have had her jump into the sex without the nightmares or the freaking out, but you didn't. And I liked that. Good job.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all of the reviews!

I did hope that no one would be offended by the story and my approach to it and I think that it's only logical for her not to jump into sex afterwards. I think I would have squicked myself if I had described it in detail, but this felt like giving just as much informtaion as the story needed, and not too much.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 08/21/07 11:13
Chapter: Nature's Cure

Aw, I'm glad Hermione's past could stop torturing her to allow her that.

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