OK you have played with our emotions long enough! Just update and give us some relief. This coming from the deprived Military wife/working mother whose husband is on his way to Iraq!
I'm still trying to get the next chapter under an NC-17 rating; there seems to be some confusion about what constitutes and what doesn't. The third-re-written version should be in Q before the week is over and then it's just one more chapter to go.
May I salute you and your husband?
so good . please finish. snape is so hot !!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's coming, it's coming. Thanks for reading!
is this the line.“I am not a nice man,” he said finally, stopping his round of the room.
Author's Response: Nope. Not even close. Didn't I give it away somewhere down there? It's the bit about Snape not calling Ron anything worse than a pronoun. Thanks for reading!
Oh and when does our dear Professor look anything other than serious? Only in one ooc fanfic or other. Hee Hee. I can't believe you left it right there, so Snape ish of you..=D Cheers
More like bunnies... Hee Hee. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Oooh sometimes I really hate this computer I wrote out this lovely review and it logged me off. So anyhow let me try to recap what I was going to say. I was laughing so much at the "Erm.." I had to get up and walk out of the room I was laughing so much. I could just see Severus thinking "Did I bloody well just say Erm?" Too funny! You are doing a great job on this one. ~Cheers~
Cheers for lovely reviews!
Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading!
I love it so far. Your work is very addicting.
I cannot wait to read Chapter 10.
Author's Response: And I can't wait for you to read it; having a bit of trouble getting it to clear the rating but it should be through soon! Thanks for reading!
I am loving this fic so far. I really like the paring and have read many SS/HG fics. I think that you have an interesting writing style and i like jumping between what SS and HG are thinking. It give the reader good insight. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: And I love writing this fic. The great thing about writing the pairing is that it actually requires intelligence on top of the clicking of personalities and, ya know, good writing. It requires a certain command of the language, because they both have it, and a sense of sarcasm and dry wit. The jumping back and forth....that just happened. It started as just hers and then was informed, under no uncertain terms by Severus, that his opinion was just as important in the matter and just as deserving of being told, thank you very much. The chapter is already in Q and I have a feeling it shall be enjoyed by all....
ugh....I'm sorry but as much as I liked the story initially...I cannot stomach it anymore. It just died on me once Hermione started acting ridiculously stupid and psychotic and toyed around with Snape. I can't read it any further. *throws up*
Author's Response: *cleans up mess from review page*
Nicely written chapter...I still would have liked Snape to have chucked hermione's ass to the curb for putting him through all that crap....especially since she KNEW she had mental issues. I so hate her in this story. ugh!
Author's Response: Okay....
oh i loved it! yes, i have been itching for a great snape/hermione story that retained their characters at the same time. When will we get to read the next part. There I was totally immersed in the story and to end it at that part! its torture!
Author's Response: Sorry for that. I am nasty with the cliffies, aren't I? Next chapter is going through so soon as Jenna decides to mod it. Thanks for reading!
Oh, are we finally getting down to something *interesting* here? ::wink::
Anyways, so does Hermione know what she did last night, with the dream and the thrashing about and everything? Or did she think Snape was talking about something else?
Maybe. Maybe not. *whistles innocently* Although, speaking of 'getting down,' I really wanted my tag for the Herbology course on the beta boards to be 'Herbology and Healing: Where Hogwarts students come to get down and dirty." Poultry didn't let though...*snarks*
I'm pretty sure that she's very well aware of what Severus was talking about.
Thanks for reading!
Ohhhhhhh evil evil slow moderators. How you toture meeeeeeeeeee. I saw the Next underneath Previous and naturally assumed that another chapter was available. I think I shall... *dies*
Slian, I was riveted...riveted I say! The way you kept Severus snarky but still compassionate was just mesmerizing. His angst over what to do, and his whole day of worrying paid off in the end. I loved every word you typed out. Hermione waking up and feeling so sad and resigned to being rejected for her inablility to put off the memories was masterful. I could practically read the frown lines on her face. Nice job!
Moderators, please hurry and validate that next chapter, you know you are going to anyway, and I (and probably a lot of other readers) are dying for the lemons. Thank you. xoxoxoxoxo
ACK! NO! It is not the moderators who are evil, just my computer, which broke and so I had no power for the week and couldn't update the next chapter into Q until a few days after the last one had gone through. Much sorries and begging for forgiveness-ess, kay? Jenna is simply MARVY
His day of worrying hasn't quite paid off yet...
The lemons? I is being verily confused.
Thanks as always for the wonderful review!
what a cruelly delightful cliffhanger! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I also should say I love the options he gave her, euphoria or alcohol...haha. His reasoning is so true too, which makes it even better. Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, the euphoria or alcohol; it borders the line between OoC and IC, don't you think? Chapter is, as always, already in Q. Thanks for reading!
Aw, now thats just a mean ending. I like this new take on Severus and Hermoine. I was so afraid he was going to rape her in the beginning. I didn't know how they would get together after that. You've done a good job in showing us the softer side of Severus. He really has to be careful with what he says and does. Even though its been a year, the memories come back, even when you think you are ready. Often times women will have a safe word for their partners or they set certain guidelines and rules, such as no pinning of the arms, nothing that makes her feel trapped. You've done a good job on a subject that can be sensitive and difficult. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And you'll forgive me for that ending when you read the next chapter. Promise.
Wait I'm totally lost...is he a spy and did she put him under a spell?
Author's Response: He WAS a spy and she DID use a spell on him. Where are you getting this spy thing from?
OMG...why did she just put a spell on him. Hermione doesn't seem the type. In Snape secretly a spy?
Author's Response: Because, Hermione is, above all, a girl who goes after what she wants. And what could Snape possibly be spying on at this point?
Ah...Hermione. Man so sad that it's only Fred, Ginny, Harry and Hermione.
Author's Response: And Snape. And Remus (though that isn't mentioned here at all, now that I think of it. Must have been the full moon....) But yes, very sad. Thanks for reading!
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: It's coming. Thanks for reading!
Another great chapter, I really do admire your writing ability. I really enjoy picturing Severus fumbling around, completely unsure of what to do or say next, it makes him appear human...which is something you don't always realize he is. I feel really horrible for Hermione though. The poor girl! I hope she is one day able to overcome those horrible events and be able to be happy with someone. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Severus promises to help her overcome them. He has assured me of such. Thanks for reviewing!