wow, just wow! Loved this.
I loved it
Great story so far well done
This story had me on the edge of my seat. Particularly when McGonagall walked in. Very well written.
omg this is amazing i cried...it is deep disturbing and sweet i love it!
I just finished this, so I thought I owed you a review! I won't bore you with grammer shizz, because, to be honest, I enjoyed the story too much! I am proud to say that I do like Snamione, but only when I can find a good one.This, was a GREAT one! It was just so.... Darn, I lost my words. I really really enjoyed it. And two D/A prequels? Well i'm gonna have to go and read those! D/A is my fave, and I know they will be awesome. Well done again for a fantasticv fic.
I usually am VERY uptight about Americanisms, but I, barely, noticed them in this fic. (not because they werent there, but because i was too excited to read on!) I will still note about them though. "realiSE" no 'z' and "coloUr" basically, if you are typing a 'z' during a HP FF, it is almost certianly wrong :-p But, that is it from me. Well done, it was a brilliant fic, and the best Snamione I have ever read.
GAAAAAH! Sorry for acting like a weirdo, but I thought this story was just SO cute, sexy, and awesome!
I loved this fic! It was very well written.
Oh my gosh I absolutely LOVE this fic. It's probably one of my favorite SS/HG so far. I loved how he said 'Erm' in the last chapter. and I love how Hermione just goes ahead and get's what she wants. This is very well written.
This is an absolutely wonderful story!
quite a disappointing endding
but good use of words
and a great story
This is a really nice opening; I liked the way you focused entirely from Hermione's point-of-view. I tire of fanfics that slip carelessly from one character to another.
AWWWWW..... I'm glad she got a happy ending... tho that last hapter.... well, wow :-)
Ten points from slytherin for their offensive head of house?
oh my goodness. this was the.. HOTTEST and best chapter. you are a very talented romance writer. consider it as a profession. of course... not always sticking to harry potter fan fics
I'm glad to see that this is alot easier to read than the prequel, by easier i mean less dark. Just thought 'd break of reading to say I really enjoyed Snape's thinking of Harry as the boy who insisted on living, I laughed out loud.
loved it.. i can't say anything else
Excellent. I like Hermione from the inside. I am glad to see someone who realizes that those who are incredibly smart don't just have relationships with books! Once again: GREAT beginning. On to the next chapters!