This is a well written story on one of my favorite topics. I can't wait to hear more!
Remus seems mature for his age even now. Interesting, but it works all the same. Besides that, diddo to what I said last chapter.
Author's Response: I made Remus more mature than his age would allow, because in my opinion, Remus always was very mature. Having the burden of such a condition at a young age forced him to grow up very quickly to cope. The vocabulary and expressions are not those of a child, because i wanted to write the story as if adult Remus were looking back at significant memories in his past. Thanks for both reviews. I enjoy getting feed-back from my readers. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as I enjoy writing it.
I can't believe you don't have more reviews! I love the start to this story. The discription is wonderful, and the OC's reactions to what happened are marvelous. :-) I am happy.
Author's Response: Thanks you. I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far. I try to remain as true to the story as possible, so I try to make the oc's reaction as realistic as possible. thanks for the review.
this story is amazing!! i can't wait to find out more in later chapters!
Author's Response: thanks. i hope you like the rest of the story as well.
Now I'm happy.
Because contrary to what Remus thinks, I know he's getting in.
Author's Response: shhhh! (he doesn't know it yet) thanks though...I'm really glad that you like my story. I feel truly honoured.
Poor lttile kid.
*wipes away tear*
I'm adding this.
You have me hooked.
I can't stop.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot. The idea for this story just came to me. I'm really glad that you like it.
I really like Remus a lot, and i thought the way you portrayed him was brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love Remus too. He's the easiest character for me to write. Thanks for your review.