ah. i'm so excited for the next post! followed this story from harrypotterfanfiction.com but you still haven't posted. i love your james character. a lot a lot a lot.
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WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER
Author's Response: .. not written yet.
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awww.... that's so sad :(
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update damn it!! this is a good story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's good. I'm proud of it. Just very, very busy. Trust me when I say I have plans for it.
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cool!
(sorry, not very significant)
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Oh. Wow. Crouch. I'm such an idiot.
When I first started reading this, I thought that 'Crouch' sounded like grouch or, um, an unmentionable. But then around chapter four, I realized. Crouch. Barty Crouch. So yeah. I'm pretty slow. :P
And... oh, my God. That last paragraph made me cry a bit. You're such a good writer. I'm happy that Lily finally resisted Michael.
Update soon!
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I have no clue as to what I want to write.
I am dazed and I have never in y life felt a story touch me so.I can easily call it my favorite story.
Do notice that I am calling
it a story.
I have not felt so emotional throught reading a story.
I can only say that I a speechless.
THANK YOU !!!
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Oh please don't make us wait for more. I really liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens. Does she catch up to James?
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OMG...I love it...she better not go bak to that abusive SOB or ill be pissed...I love James..XOXOXO...cant wait for the next chapter..!!!
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oh i like it... I dont think it could ever happen in the hp series but its still good and cant wait till chap. 2 :D
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Everytime I try to submit a review, it gets messed up. This is my third attempt. Here it goes.
Well to start off, this is probably one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read. Proffesional writer to fanfiction, hands down.
I love the situation that you put Lily in, its unlike anything I've seen her get into. I feel horrible for Micheal, but at the same time I just want him gone, and as a writer to get the reader to feel that is amazing. Then of course Jamesyyy come along and begins to help and then look what Lily goes and does. Argh! I was just going 'dont do it! dont do it!' the whole time. And wham, she went and got herself into that. I feel horrible for James, especially after everything he did for her. But I know he would give up on her, so thats good.
Otherwise, to me, its prefect. Description, emotion, word choice etc.. I would do anything to write half as good as you. Wow. that can only describe it.
Pleaseeee post soon =]
-Amanda
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Everytime I try to submit a review, it gets messed up. This is my third attempt. Here it goes.
Well to start off, this is probably one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read. Proffesional writer to fanfiction, hands down.
I love the situation that you put Lily in, its unlike anything I've seen her get into. I feel horrible for Micheal, but at the same time I just want him gone, and as a writer to get the reader to feel that is amazing. Then of course Jamesyyy come along and begins to help and then look what Lily goes and does. Argh! I was just going 'dont do it! dont do it!' the whole time. And wham, she went and got herself into that. I feel horrible for James, especially after everything he did for her. But I know he would give up on her, so thats good.
Otherwise, to me, its prefect. Description, emotion, word choice etc.. I would do anything to write half as good as you. Wow. that can only describe it.
Pleaseeee post soon =]
-Amanda
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Wow, I really like your story. I hope you are able to post soon!
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MORE MORE MORE. . . Or else
On a happier note, I LLLLOOOOOVVVVEEEEEE it!!!!!!!
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The only thing that I can say is wow. I really have enjoyed the story, and am very curious to find out what happens next. Great writing, keep it up.
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awesome... i love how you started its seems really interesting
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Really good I love it !!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next !!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Twiggy~
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Well, I must say that this is great. Truly 'mazing. Now get rid of crouch and let love take it's course.
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