Please, please update this soon! It's very well=written and I love it! I hope you're not too busy, and you can find time to continue writing this, because it would be a shame if you didn't!
Loved the chapter.....truly a tearjerker.....
please update....dying to know what happens next....please update
oh I love this chapter. I want to know what happens how they get together. Please write on and write fast can't wait.
I DISLIKE THIS!!
Kicking myself as I've realised that you're a slow updater (last update 7 months ago and the story started in '06 D:).
Please update soon!
I FREAKING LOVE YOU!!
Holy god, you're amazing
I like it (:
Love it, actually.
It's really good!
I love the way how you can see the Lily/James relationship reluctantly forming and the hilarity of the fact that I know what the turnout is going to be.
Very, very good, can't wait to read more and see how it unfolds!
I really hope you'll update this again... ._. I'm in tears.
WOOW! it is just wonderful and charming and... i don't know. Just keep writing.ok? Please. i just want to read more. its realy perfect. you shouldn't give up.
wow this is an incredibly beautiful chapter. writing wise, i really like the way your style changed from lily and james: their story of love. it's much darker, which i like, and it's also very plot filled. also leaves me on a cliffhanger, i really want you to continue this one, please?
Wow. I am officially addicted to this story. I've just recently gotten back into reading at MNFF, and this story has blown my mind.
To be honest, I was in a rather emotionally abusive relationship myself, and I continually went back to it despite my friends' warnings. I feel a very strong bout of sympathy for Lily, as well as a frustration with her for ignoring good sense.
This fanfic is real and raw, and you have truly captured the nature of an abusive relationship. The best and most real emotion you've given Lily is the lack of self-esteem. I remember feeling so worthless without that boy, and then feeling almost as bad when with him, and yet still feeling like I was helping him.
Just wow. Amazing job. Can't wait to read more.
Thank you for writing such a touching fic.
your best one, really. I hope the next chapter will be out soon, and I'm looking forward to it, at any rate.
Omg. For real, you need to update like right now. That was so good! I can't wait to read more!
Lily Evan wouldn't have been in that situation.
I so love this story. I've been with it since it can't be almost two years now? can it? anyway, it's one of my all time favourites and seeing the update made me almost die of happiness. haha, brill story.
your james is perfect although lily isn't how i imagine her but it works amazingly in this story.
I really hope you update soon.
pleeeeease write more!! This is wonderfully written, but horribly sad!!
i was both happy and suprised to see this story in my inbox. it was the first story i read on this site and definitly was my favorite and when u discontinued it on this site and ur two other sites i was dissappointed. But i hope that u will continue writing it because i love reading it.
I'm so glad you're continuing this story!! Thank you so much, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter =D
Author's Response: haha, i actually haven't written anything new in awhile, since this chapter was rejected on mnff once upon a time ago. yet, i figured i'd try again and see if i could pop out any new chapters this summer.