Reviewer: Baileigh Black
Date: 05/17/06 12:43
Chapter: Butterbeer

Tres bien! cest excellent!

Author's Response: oh merci! lol :P

Reviewer: KenTuck
Date: 05/16/06 19:37
Chapter: Butterbeer

This is really good so far, and really funny. I like that despite it is humour fic everyone is still in character. It doesn't seem that you really talked about Fred and George enough though.

"Harry stepped in from of Ron and embraced Hermione" (it should be front)

"Its been rough, but Im alright. How about you? I see you have a tan, Harry said and held her at arms length.

Yes, we vacationed in Cancun. And, if you need to talk, Im here, Hermione responded."
This quote seems very rushed to me. Shouldn't there more of a transition? He's sad and then a second later he's hitting on Hermione. Maybe they should be sad for two lines and then happy for two lines?

I noticed that Ron got a new room. That's pretty cool. Is it just because he's growing up? Next to that line 'one' needs to be capatalized.

Just some little things, but over all I love it.

Author's Response: thanks for the help! typos will get the end of me. lol. what is spell check for if it doesn't catch that? lol. the transition? yeah, i noticed that too, but i'm not sure WHAT would make the transition, you know? any ideas? yes ron got a new room. for a few reasons: i couldn't remember what it looked like before and didn't want to go looking for it. and yes, because he's growing up. lol. thanks for the very helpful review!!!

Reviewer: ronmione8844886
Date: 05/16/06 18:49
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

That was super good! I can't wait till you write more!

Author's Response: thanks! i will!!!

Reviewer: Nevermore135
Date: 05/16/06 15:54
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

he he he

Author's Response: ha ha ha?

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/16/06 11:14
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

Great part.. well at least they know the truth now!!

Author's Response: thanks!!! let's see what happens while they know the truth and before they get an antidote!!

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 05/16/06 11:00
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

*giggle* Are we SURE that Ron got some of the potion? He's acting really normal...

Author's Response: yes we're sure. lol. his chracter does have a bit of a temper whether he has potion in him or not, though. right?

Reviewer: libby627onVTM
Date: 05/16/06 6:33
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

awwwwwwww!!! im an r/hr shipper, and that chappie ending was totally sweet! i haven't reviewed yet on this fic, but it is really good! i would tell you i put this in my favorites, but i put all the stories i read in my favorites. but if i could put them in order by how much i like them, this one would deffinately be at the top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Author's Response: at the top?? yay!!! lol. well, thanks for reviewing!!! i'm very happy you liked it

Reviewer: Christie
Date: 05/16/06 0:38
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

Ooh! This is getting better! I like it.
xxXenaxx

Author's Response: i'm glad it's improving!! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 05/15/06 23:27
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

Ooh just checked my favorites and found out this was updated! Great job on presenting the truth. I am an R/H shipper but I really like how the conflicting emotions are going! I wonder if Ron really does love Hermione.......and who does Hermione love? I can't wait for the next chapter great job!

Author's Response: yeah, i wasn't sure how people would like the presention of the truth. i guess it was ok since i haven't had any negative reviews on it (yet). -who does Hermione love?- we find out next chapter, i'm thinking. thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 05/15/06 22:22
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

well, that was short and sweet. i wonder where ur gonna take this now that they know...perhaps make hermione fall for both twins next? update soon!

Author's Response: the twins? maybe i shall go do some editing and change a few things . . . jk. ha, no, that's not gunna happen. but that was creative thinking!!

Reviewer: Sperk Carm Evans
Date: 05/15/06 19:34
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

HEY I'M THE FIRST REVIEWER!!!! YEEPEEEE

Author's Response: yes, you were for that chapter. go you! lol

Reviewer: Sperk Carm Evans
Date: 05/15/06 19:33
Chapter: Fight!!! Fight!!! Fight!!!

uhmmm what will happen next???? does Ron really love Hermione? Does he wholeheartedly forgive Harry???? uhmm many many questions....
Update soon so I can have my answers!!!!

Author's Response: -does Ron really love Hermione? - we'll see. . . . -Does he wholeheartedly forgive Harry????- right now in the story no. but once the potion is eliminated from their systems he does. i'm glad you have questions!! that excites me lol.

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/15/06 19:30
Chapter: In the Garden

Wicked ch. !!!!

Author's Response: thanks!!!

Reviewer: lilyandjames14
Date: 05/15/06 19:29
Chapter: Two Truths and a Cure

"no coment"

Author's Response: would that be good or bad?

Reviewer: HermioneTonks
Date: 05/15/06 19:26
Chapter: Butterbeer

This is SO terribly funny!!
Your on my favs.!

Author's Response: thanks for reading and liking the story!

Reviewer: Rictemsempra
Date: 05/14/06 19:27
Chapter: Two Truths and a Cure

This story is great so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i'm actually gunna get my next chapter beta-ed!! lol. so it'll be up when it can.

Reviewer: Demons_quill
Date: 05/13/06 20:22
Chapter: Two Truths and a Cure

Love it! Can't wait till the next chappy's up! Added this to my favorites.


Author's Response: thanks!! the next chapter is waiting!!! it's the best one yet!! lol.

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 05/13/06 8:54
Chapter: Two Truths and a Cure

oh, it's getting good! but wouldn't they have had feelings for each other (ron and hermione) without the potion? hey already like each other.

Author's Response: they didn't in the beginning for the sake of the story. but maybe they will afterwards. thanks for the great comments!!!

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 05/13/06 8:48
Chapter: Sickness

how sweet! ron's getting the vote, i guess. but did ginny take this opportunity to talk to harry? i'll have to see....

Author's Response: ginny doesn't talk to harry. fred and george told her not to tell the trio. but, will they get there in time? dun dunn dunnn

Reviewer: chochang1994
Date: 05/13/06 8:43
Chapter: At The Lake

lol! but ohmygod, that potion is strong!

Author's Response: oh yes it is. lol do you expect anything less from Fred and George? :P

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Makers of Fine Wands by CanisMajor 1st-2nd Years
Ollivander of Croton arrives in Athens in 382 BC with big dreams, noneof which...
James and Me by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
Annabel is having a bad day. Her sudden and unexpected meeting with a face from...
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES