Reviewer: Maire Potter
Date: 06/03/06 20:23
Chapter: Maybe I'm Afraid of the Way I Love You

gangster story!! usually i don't go for lily/severus. i usually think that he loved her but she didn't return his affections, but the quote made me look at it. all in all a excellent story

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I think Severus was infatuated with Lily, but she didn't quite feel the same way. In this story, I've decided to portray her as quite lonely and so when Severus comes along to cheer her up, she's just curious. Anyway, I won't say anymore, or it'll spoil the ending! Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 05/19/06 21:12
Chapter: Help Me Dry The Tears I've Cried

Oo I wasnt sure how this would work, but its very well written and very interesting. I like the idea that Lily grew bored of her perfect student image. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The last chapter is coming soon - please keep reading. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: born2bwild
Date: 05/04/06 17:29
Chapter: Help Me Dry The Tears I've Cried

I LOVE IT! WRITE! WRITE! Sorry, but I can't WAIT to read more! You're killing me!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The final chapter will be coming very soon!

Reviewer: newo_ikkin
Date: 05/03/06 15:32
Chapter: Help Me Dry The Tears I've Cried

yay good chapter

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: newo_ikkin
Date: 04/26/06 16:19
Chapter: Maybe I'm Afraid of the Way I Love You

i'm quite loving this first chapter... write more soon ^_^

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Chapter 2 is in queue. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: THEFROG
Date: 04/20/06 10:48
Chapter: Maybe I'm Afraid of the Way I Love You

Oooh, very nice, this is good. Good characterisation on snape :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! This will be a 3-part story, so look out for more soon!

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