'bad guys' hahaha.
you don't say?
i would love to see them dance. nice beginning to what is sure to be an excellent story
i loved it please write more!!!!!
-LibertyV
La! I love this story.
Is that the end?!
It cant be.
haha. Amazing.
Go Hermione! Lucius is a bad man.
I must say, I love Draco in this book.
Yep. So, there!
“Can’t it just be straight for one day?” muttered Mrs. Granger.
insult insult insult insult insult insult insult
I assume you have straight hair. I do not. I feel this quote is on par with the people who think hair cannot be pretty unless it is straight or simply wavy. it is true that curly hair takes a lot more patience than straight hair. there are also a lot of advantages.
i love this story so far....good job
wow.... things are starting to get inense between hermione and drac.
wow.... i wasn't expecting that!
omg..... i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
this was an amazing chapter!!!!
that was a amazing start for your story. you did a good job of staying true to the charactors, and adding your own little touches as well.
This was a great chapter. I absolutely loved the part where Hermione got so furious with Lucius for showing up at the wedding that she kneed him! I laughed so hard because I could envision it as it happened. Exactly what he desrved and then some.
Ron's quip during an already agitated situation that it might have been him that blackened Malfoy's eye, was funny. Leave it to him to say something foolish like that at an inappropriate time.
Also, Dobby and the socks! Quite a fetish he has and I like how you worked it in. I enjoy the humor you insert into your story.
Lacey
What could you do with all those socks?
Hmm...
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 14th?
Ha,Ha,Ha,That was AWSOME!!!!!!!!! Hermionewas amazing!!!!! Lucius must have been cringing in fear !!!!!! Draco must have been in awe, and slightly fearful, Man don't mess with Hermione. Dang, she was upset. I liked the the way you said she looked like hells angel in white, I can only imagine what she was like!! It was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRAVO- i was feeling so down today and this is the perfect cheering charm!
aw omg i love that chapter! anyways
i have got to give hermione credit for kneeing lucius in the groin! ha that was great! update asap!
it's very very very very good. it has a nice plot with very nice pacing, not too fast, not too slow. i really loved the way you portrayed Narcissa Malfoy. Keep it up!