the story started out really well, thenthe piano came in, ron wanting to learn to pay a muscal instrument was slightly uncharacteristic bt was acceptable. then hermione became a bit wishy washy an so did ron, the ending didn't fit the rest of the story. the beginning was reall great, not so much the end
I really enjoyed your story.
I love your story it's sooo sweet!
i absoulutly love it!! it is soo sweet!
Aw...! That`s adorable!!! It did sound a little ooc in some parts-but it was really good! 10/10!! Does that sound good to you or should I rate higher?
AAAAAWWWWWWWW!!!!!! Now can anyone guess why i have my penname??!!
Wonderful. Absolutly wonderful. I love the ending! Good Job.
Yes, I did like this! I don't care if you think it has a sappy ending, I looooooooovvvee sappy stories! Keep writing, you're great!
Really nice! I loved it! Great idea with the piano! So cute! Mind you, if I skidadled to some wizard school for six years, I most certainly could not play piano anymore! But then again, Hermione is a genious and it makes a good story... I'm gonna check if you've written anything else...
Bravo! Well written. Too bad it wasn't any longer.
I love the way you used the piano to bring Hermione and Ron closer. Vey clever idea. Also, using one of Josh Groban's songs was a great idea.
That was really good! Wish that wasn't the end though!
I love it...All of it. It is so sweet. I was so gitty when they did express their feelings. I could not stop smiling.
Ooooooo. I loved it. It was so sweet. :)
Liked it!? that's an understatement...i loved it !!
Oh I loved this! Update soon!
not bad...its really cute i like it...keep going!!