Reviews For Broken Enigma
Reviewer: Love_Snape
Date: 01/16/09 15:13
Chapter: Shattered Stars

Please update with a new chapter. Cuz this is a very good story.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/29/08 18:16
Chapter: Xavier

I'm really enjoying this fic. It's really funny when Snape bumps into Hermione in his animagus form. The first time we saw him fly off into the forest someone was watching, will we ever find out who? And Ron deffinately deserves everything he gets for cheating on Hermione. Harry I feel a little more sorry for, he was right in a way, he was damned if he did and damned if he didn't. When Hermione went to the bank, the goblins eyes glowed strangely just like hers when she lost control and threw Harry from her room, is there a connection? And what exactly is Snape working on, what was that box and who is the guy he got it from? You simpley must update, I've got to know. Please update soon.

Reviewer: teresaschultz06
Date: 01/13/08 22:34
Chapter: Bird's Eye View

good story all around, i can't wait for the next chapter to come out...

Especially liked the 'Birds eye view' chapter, it was interesting and cool, even more interesting when i was brought back to the professor actually being the bird. Although it was obvious..

Anyways, good all around

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/25/07 2:16
Chapter: Xavier

Tut tut *shakes head at Ron* Well he did get gloves... maybe he should have been more careful :) Hmmm Severus keeps bumping into Hermione (in his bird form) Is he keeping an eye on her?

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/25/07 1:44
Chapter: The Morning After

Nice to see that Dumbledore cares for Hermione *chuckles at thte image of him smacking Harry and Ron* Nice ending... but why does Dumbledore look with haunted eyes?

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 10/25/07 1:33
Chapter: Shattered Stars

Ooooh cool... THis story sound very promising. Can't wait to carry on reading!

Reviewer: Lily Elegance
Date: 10/24/07 15:03
Chapter: Xavier

This fic is great, I can't wait for chap 11 so they can finally start working together. Update soon!

Reviewer: kagomelynnblack
Date: 09/12/07 0:52
Chapter: Xavier

Yay I can't wait! I am enjoying your story so far. I wonder when Hermione and Severous are gonna start interacting! and is it just me or is Dumbledore pushing them towards each other?!??!?! Just wasn't sure!

Reviewer: naptownsprincess
Date: 08/23/07 14:32
Chapter: Xavier

I ynderstand that they need to become thier own person but please let them remain really close friends like the use to be. I just love this story I can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: VB StaR 08
Date: 08/21/07 16:19
Chapter: Xavier

pls hurry up w/ the next chapter! it seems u have set every thing up now hopefully its time to get into the jucy part!

Reviewer: Leona MacEwan
Date: 08/18/07 8:39
Chapter: Xavier

This was very interesting and very nicely plotted. I am curious as to what all is going on. Keep writing. I was disappointed that the story had not been finished. Who will the romance be between? I was rather hoping and Severus/Hermoine, but it isn't clear quite yet. Won't you have to grow Hermoine to be older? I am interested in Snape's bird. All very nice. Don't let the story escape you...

Reviewer: DeathEaterNadia
Date: 08/10/07 12:02
Chapter: Xavier

I cant recieve the next chapter, as it says the story is done, please can you instruct me to navigate the questioning chapter as i find this story quite compelling to my spare time. Wishing a speedy reply, N

Author's Response: I'm sorry to inform you but this story isn't complete yet. All the chapters that are up and have been validated and are viewable. I'm currently finishing up Chapter 11 and intend to send it off to the Beta hopefully by the end of the weekend.

Reviewer: magichick123
Date: 04/29/07 11:07
Chapter: Xavier

your story is great please keep writing

Reviewer: xoxLisaxox
Date: 04/12/07 15:15
Chapter: Xavier

Please wirite more!!!

Author's Response: Working on it! I promise, I really do hope to have chapter 11 [with 12-14 soon after] up in the near future. Just trying to get through finals. More story is coming!

Reviewer: freds pet
Date: 04/10/07 8:54
Chapter: Xavier

Please, I need the next!
So curious

Author's Response: I'm slowly [but surely] making my way through chapter 11 right now. I promise to have something new in the very near future!

Reviewer: loveeyourhatee
Date: 03/01/07 22:46
Chapter: Xavier

wow!! i love this story.. it is amazing!!

i hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 02/01/07 13:34
Chapter: Xavier

wooo! love it!
keep going with your writing!

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 01/27/07 15:24
Chapter: The Morning After

awesome stuff:D

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 01/27/07 15:10
Chapter: Shadowed Conversations

yayyy! that's amazing writing,
love it

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: mrs_weasley
Date: 01/27/07 14:50
Chapter: Shattered Stars

love it

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it

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