Reviewer: Tam Nella
Date: 03/20/07 17:26
Chapter: one-shot

:) good story, good deatil, i like the gohst in france.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/06/06 13:35
Chapter: one-shot

that was great. It showed how hermione evolved from the muggle world really well and how she changed. I liked the bit about relating holidays to magic

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 06/20/06 14:13
Chapter: one-shot

Well done. I never considered what Hermione's life was like when she wasn't at school. You did a really good job describing it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't consider it very much either until I went away to school myself and it occured to me how hard it must be for all the muggleborns to split their lives into two separate worlds. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 06/13/06 16:21
Chapter: one-shot

This is amazing, powerful...I don't have your talent with words, but that's as close as I could come. 11/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 04/17/06 16:58
Chapter: one-shot

Wow! I loved your style in this! Hermione is so canon, and yet so different! I love how you go through each summer, and briefly describe each one! In the books, it seems that Hermione is pretty close to her parents, and slowly drifts away, and you did a very good job describing it! The only critique I can find is maybe adding a "But" to the beginning of the last sentence, but it doesn't matter if you do or don't. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I really like writing Hermione, but I had a hard time with her in this. It felt like she was acting more childish than she would at Hogwarts. But then, I go to a boarding school as well, and I don't act the same way around my parents as I do at school. So I guessed that Hermione would have let her guard down around her parents at first, but as the years went on she'd try to keep more from them, because of the war. Thanks for reading!

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