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Reviews For Invictus

Name: poisened_pink (Signed) · Date: 05/03/06 14:12 · For: Invictus
u haft to write more

Name: Khrys (Signed) · Date: 05/01/06 15:56 · For: Invictus
Excellent bunny idea!

Name: Hogwarts_chick (Signed) · Date: 04/28/06 21:22 · For: Invictus
aww....adorable story. It's just incredibly depressing how all their (James' and Lily's) dreams were crushed. All in one night...

Name: Potter Girl (Signed) · Date: 04/25/06 18:37 · For: Invictus
But Lily only had Harry before she was killed, and Harry was 1.

Name: tonks_667 (Signed) · Date: 04/25/06 4:19 · For: Invictus
Ohhhh...... So sad. Ohhhh..... or maybe it's this story and listening to a sad song at the same time shouldn't be done. You made me cry *sob*

Name: myth_of_beauty (Anonymous) · Date: 04/24/06 18:06 · For: Invictus
One word. WOW!

Name: RedheadObsession (Signed) · Date: 04/23/06 20:05 · For: Invictus
Aww I liked that..

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 19:42 · For: Invictus
Oh my gosh! My jaw completely dropped when Lily mentioned Harry! That is soo soo sad but it was really a lovely piece. I've wondered about the possibility before. Nicely written, I like how you started with James and the image of the three of them dozing on the couch together was very sweet.

Name: Lilypudding (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 19:03 · For: Invictus
This is a really good story. I think it's a really original idea. You read a lot of stories where Lily is pregnant with Harry, but this idea is original. I think the story was absolutely great and error free, though the paragraph where James is babbling probably should have been split up into two or more paragraphs, as it currently isn't exactly easy on the eye. However, I really liked the nice twist where Harry could have been an older brother. At the same time, this story really saddens me that James and Lily never got to see their second child, and the baby never had a chance at life. Great job for a one-shot, though!

Name: Winky (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 17:18 · For: Invictus
ah.. how exciting!! i always thought james and lily would have other kids besides harry, cuz i always think james wanted to have his own quidditch team.. lol. this just fits perfectly into it.. only they die.. thats one of the many reason i don't read fan fics about when they're married, it reminds me that they're going to die.. o well.. great story though!!!

Name: i love prongs (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 16:25 · For: Invictus
wow i love it at fist i thought it was lily telling james she was preggers wiv harry and then it turned out harry had already been born wow .........just...wow........

Name: mugglegurl (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 14:35 · For: Invictus
When I first read that Lily told James her news, I thought she was telling him she was pregnant with Harry, but then you bring Harry into play. A really neat twist. I always wondered if maybe Harry had a sibling that he didn't know about. 10/10

Name: teddy240b (Signed) · Date: 04/22/06 14:17 · For: Invictus
A really good short

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