Reviews For Invictus
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 06/26/12 18:28
Chapter: Invictus

and then they die. (shake my head mournfully).
its really well written and quite close to the story line. i really like it. :)

Reviewer: Eowynatheart
Date: 03/18/11 19:10
Chapter: Invictus

This makes me cry. Did you have to? Honestly, I might be forever scarred because of this very well written piece of work. It isn't real, it isn't real, it isn't real it isn't real

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 09/08/07 15:29
Chapter: Invictus

I've never thought of the idea of Lily dying with an unborn child. That would make it so much sadder. Very well done.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 09/03/07 9:39
Chapter: Invictus

I think I might have read this before but this is still such a bittersweet fanfic. Great job

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/20/07 15:43
Chapter: Invictus


Reviewer: lilyseyes
Date: 02/28/07 22:06
Chapter: Invictus

woah.. a new approach. i never expected lily to be pregnant.. again.

i liked it. a lot. it was very cute.
poor lily. i love her to death. and james.
terrible, terrible.

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 12/27/06 14:01
Chapter: Invictus

wait, is this leading up to some AU in which Harry has some ounger sibling or does it just make their deaths sadder?

good story though

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/02/06 7:33
Chapter: Invictus

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! loved it, shame they had to die :( well done. awesome 10/10

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 11/25/06 14:01
Chapter: Invictus

Brilliant! If only they hadn't have died.

Reviewer: Breanie
Date: 10/30/06 19:16
Chapter: Invictus

thats so depressing to think that lily is pregnant and then she dies and dwhat about the poor baby??

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 10/08/06 22:26
Chapter: Invictus

:`( *tears* And they didn't know that Harry would grow up alone.

Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 10/08/06 20:50
Chapter: Invictus

It was well written, and original. But what I didn't like was it turned the situation into a lose-lose one. With the way Jo wrote this Lily sacrifised herslef to save her son Harry. But you made it so Lily sacrifsed her self and un-born child, making her act slightly selfish. Still very good job!

Reviewer: sirius_rox
Date: 09/13/06 21:46
Chapter: Invictus

aww.. that's sad.. the poor kid.. stupid voldemort

Reviewer: KateCarter
Date: 07/05/06 0:27
Chapter: Invictus's so sad, because you know what's coming...good job!

Reviewer: B_Bootyful
Date: 06/17/06 16:05
Chapter: Invictus

Oh, if only you had seen my face when I realised she wasn't pregnant with Harry, but with a second child! I've never thought about that before: Could Lily have been pregnant when she was murdered? Oh, it just brings tears to my eyes.

Again, you're amazingly talented. And creative, too! You obviously thought outside the box on this one.

The thing that brought it all home? The fact that James and Lily had absolutely no idea their baby would never be born. Usually in stories with them in their later years, they have a "feeling" that "something"'s going to happen. I love how they're just innocent, unsuspecting parents in your story.


Reviewer: Seductive_Swan
Date: 05/27/06 1:03
Chapter: Invictus

I couldn't help it; I cried.

Reviewer: TwinTrouble
Date: 05/23/06 13:18
Chapter: Invictus

Excellently written! I especially enjoyed the part where James says to Harry that he might one day snag a redhead (since we know he does). Very good connection. Please continue to write. I'd love to see your take on what might happen in Book 7.

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 05/22/06 7:53
Chapter: Invictus

Cool story. I thought lily was gonna be pregnant with harry. until you added harry into the story. eh-hehe. nice work!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 05/14/06 15:38
Chapter: Invictus

that was so cute! i loved that. not harry, but another little tyke. well, that was very good, so you should definitley write more. this was very original too.

Reviewer: brighteyes
Date: 05/05/06 18:17
Chapter: Invictus

Awww... that was so sweet

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