Reviewer: Christie
Date: 04/19/06 12:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hehe! "Refresh my memory, how many times have you told Harry Potter that you are going to kill him? Haha! About 4 times (I think) Great story!

Reviewer: iluvalbarn
Date: 04/19/06 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol that was cool

Reviewer: iluvalbarn
Date: 04/19/06 10:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol that was cool

Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/18/06 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

*snigger* *snort* *sniggersnortsnigger* *bites lip* *snigger* *bursts out laughing* HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! Moldy...Voldy? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Frosted Honesty
Date: 04/18/06 19:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Haha...that was pretty funny. The ending really got me. Classic Gred and Forge - can't help but love it! Overall - Excellent.

Reviewer: Khrys
Date: 04/18/06 17:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Seriously hysterical!

Reviewer: starlite1881
Date: 04/18/06 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was so funny! keep writing!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/18/06 17:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh, this is hysterical! Definitely going on my favourites list. I can't stop laughing! My only qualm is that you described Fred and George as their film versions as opposed to the canon version (ie. tall and skinny, whereas they're supposed to be shorter and stocky.) Wait, sorry, gotta go. The guy who chased me all the way down Diagon Alley because my sign had the word 'poo' in it has just said to me,
"Now I shall kill you."

Author's Response: thanx for the pointer about what they really look like, that slipped my mind. but I do prefer to make them skinny and tall so there's more to make fun of.

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