Reviews For Lily's Decision
Reviewer: goldensunshine
Date: 02/10/11 22:22
Chapter: The Homo Animagum Theorem

The story was nice and slow but with some exciting parts. The ending tied up everything really well... good job

Reviewer: Muggle in the Know
Date: 02/06/10 22:56
Chapter: NEWTs

:D that is actually a really good piece of literature, and I love the plot line you came up with. But two things I noticed were.
a) The heads share a ... living space? I dont know, common room and 2 separate dorms and
b) Sirius's middle name is Orion.

But other than that it was really good.

Reviewer: ginnygirlcutie
Date: 09/09/09 22:12
Chapter: NEWTs

AMAZING

Reviewer: Nymphie THE Original
Date: 07/31/09 7:32
Chapter: NEWTs

I really liked the ending, it ended the story quite nicely

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:46
Chapter: NEWTs

That is so cute! I really love it. I really like the whole story.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:40
Chapter: The Yule Ball

I'm sooooooooo glad that they finally got together. It took them long enough!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:32
Chapter: Two Changes of Heart

I wish he would say yes. I like him.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:24
Chapter: Transfiguration and Potions

I like this chapter. I thin that that would be a cool assignment.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/24/09 23:15
Chapter: The Homo Animagum Theorem

The chapter is good. It kinda sounded like Remus was a girl though. It made me laugh.

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 09/06/08 18:22
Chapter: NEWTs

That's really great! I love the end of James taking 'chances'. Hardy harhar, that's really sweet. :DDDD

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 09/06/08 18:17
Chapter: Two Changes of Heart

hmmm. I don't think you should say 'ladies-ask-guys' for a couple of reasons. First - it's "ladies", so it should be "gentlemen", and secondly, because Dumbledore doesn't seem to strike me as someone who casually says "guys"... all in all, though, an exciting chapter!

Author's Response: That's actually a really good suggestion. "Ladies-ask-gentlemen." ... I honestly don't know why I never thought of that. I'll change it next time I have a mo' for revisions. Thanks!

Reviewer: Potterworm
Date: 06/16/08 13:39
Chapter: Transfiguration and Potions

The Obliviate was an interesting twist to make it seem canonly possible. Another good chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Potterworm
Date: 06/16/08 13:33
Chapter: The Homo Animagum Theorem

Good starting chapter. ;)

Reviewer: EmeraldDragonofInsomnia
Date: 04/24/08 9:50
Chapter: NEWTs

I loved it, this actually the first story like this involving James and Lilly that I have ever read. So far this has given me a good perspective into now another pairing for stories I would like to read, for that I thank you for the good story!

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 04/04/08 14:37
Chapter: NEWTs

Good Job! I really liked this story! It was very funny at times and sweet at others. :) Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: dumblond-katie
Date: 03/30/08 5:58
Chapter: NEWTs

This is by fare the best fan fiction I've read so far. I really loved it =)

Reviewer: hermionerocks221
Date: 03/11/08 21:34
Chapter: NEWTs

awsome story!!

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 02/20/08 18:31
Chapter: NEWTs

......im speachless.......it is amazing i love it omg that is so sweet !!!!!!!!********love*****is in the air

Reviewer: dmackrm
Date: 02/19/08 20:58
Chapter: NEWTs

liked it, but thought that solomon was a bit odd for sirius!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/18/08 19:48
Chapter: NEWTs

lol!!! great ending!!! one of the best lily/james fic i've ever read!!!

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