The story was nice and slow but with some exciting parts. The ending tied up everything really well... good job
:D that is actually a really good piece of literature, and I love the plot line you came up with. But two things I noticed were.
a) The heads share a ... living space? I dont know, common room and 2 separate dorms and
b) Sirius's middle name is Orion.
But other than that it was really good.
I really liked the ending, it ended the story quite nicely
That is so cute! I really love it. I really like the whole story.
I'm sooooooooo glad that they finally got together. It took them long enough!
I wish he would say yes. I like him.
I like this chapter. I thin that that would be a cool assignment.
The chapter is good. It kinda sounded like Remus was a girl though. It made me laugh.
That's really great! I love the end of James taking 'chances'. Hardy harhar, that's really sweet. :DDDD
hmmm. I don't think you should say 'ladies-ask-guys' for a couple of reasons. First - it's "ladies", so it should be "gentlemen", and secondly, because Dumbledore doesn't seem to strike me as someone who casually says "guys"... all in all, though, an exciting chapter!
Author's Response: That's actually a really good suggestion. "Ladies-ask-gentlemen." ... I honestly don't know why I never thought of that. I'll change it next time I have a mo' for revisions. Thanks!
The Obliviate was an interesting twist to make it seem canonly possible. Another good chapter. ;)
Good starting chapter. ;)
I loved it, this actually the first story like this involving James and Lilly that I have ever read. So far this has given me a good perspective into now another pairing for stories I would like to read, for that I thank you for the good story!
Good Job! I really liked this story! It was very funny at times and sweet at others. :) Thanks for the great read!
This is by fare the best fan fiction I've read so far. I really loved it =)
......im speachless.......it is amazing i love it omg that is so sweet !!!!!!!!********love*****is in the air
liked it, but thought that solomon was a bit odd for sirius!
lol!!! great ending!!! one of the best lily/james fic i've ever read!!!