I really like this poem! It's a great summary of what happens in the first four books in the Harry Potter series! Personally, I would really like to see an extra, second-to-last stanza about the events in Order of the Pheonix and Half Blood Prince, but that's just my opinion. I think there is a lot of room in this poem to add a stanza exploring Harry's personal feelings and his strengh in the face of loss and despair. I really like the last line, "He is the one." That really accurately sums up the entire Harry Potter series. Great poem!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I actually wanted to write about the fifth and sixth books but I wanted people who haven't read those books to enjoy a spoiler free poem. Thanks again for the review!
I really like the last stanza. Quite a nice summup of what had happened and it really reminds me of my own fanfic which is terrific!
Author's Response: thank you! it's so nice getting reviews :) i'll check out your fanfic sometime