Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 07/10/06 23:51
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Snape is just the type of person to give someone a shower of spiders for their birthday and make it look sweet. This was very cute. Well done, as always.

Author's Response: That first sentence cracked me up completely -- thanks! And for the review as well!

Reviewer: angel_charlie
Date: 04/29/06 16:22
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Cute! Love it! xx

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Blackpenny
Date: 04/25/06 18:04
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Of course, you must now write "Happy Birthday, Severus Snape." Hmmmm?

Author's Response: *ponders timeline* Hmm. Where to fit the thing... Thanks again (even if you come bearing -- gasp! -- bunnies!)

Reviewer: samiseriouslyam
Date: 04/25/06 14:45
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

*grins.* grr8. belive it or not, its going into my favs. congrats.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Blackpenny
Date: 04/24/06 18:34
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

I love this although it reminds me how much I miss waiting for chapters of "In the Eyes of Others." Nice one, indeed.

Author's Response: You know, I miss writing and posting it, too. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: thisisfun
Date: 04/23/06 17:27
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans


Author's Response: Yep.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/22/06 20:32
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Aww a lovely birthday gift, very like him, and I love that Lily knew right away. I also just loveee listening to Snape sorting out ideas in his head. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I like eavesdropping on his thought processes too. Indeed Lily knew right away -- Sirius, for instance, would have been front and center taking a bow. Subtle characters are just more fun.

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 04/19/06 20:27
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Oh, dear. When I left that first review I had no idea that you had written so many fanfics. Where on earth do you find the time? And now I want to read them all! Arg!

Author's Response: Heh. I don't sleep as much as I used to. Enjoy the reading project! And thanks again!

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 04/19/06 20:19
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

Very funny, very nice, very well written. Overall...I liked it a lot. Did the note in the begining say it was associated with a longer fic? I am so going to read it, perhaps it would explain the apparant OOCness of Snape. Despite that, it was an excellent one shot. What a NON-lets-look-deep-into-the-mind-of-so-and-so-in-a-poetic-way-by-discussing-flashes-of-their-past one-shot shoud be. If that makes sense. I have to admit, when I read the summary of this story...I thought you were talking about bodily organs. So you might want to consider adding the word "pipe" out front. To sum up this insanely long reveiw...GOOD JOB!!!

Author's Response: Oooh, no, no way am I adding a 'pipe' out front! How else would I drag in the Lily/Severus shippers? *chortle* I'm glad you liked it even if this isn't a side of Severus you expect -- it seemed to me that he is prone to being a mostly-subtle person who occasionally does utterly over-the-top things, and for some reason this was how it manifested. Given a birthday and a disused organ. I think that hyphenated term actually did make sense. If you want to try looking deep into the soul of Severus Snape with this story, though, you're welcome to give it a try. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ginny_Weasley32294
Date: 04/18/06 17:17
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

very odd

Author's Response: Not quite sure how to answer that... Yes, perhaps a bit odd. Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: BlondieFangurl
Date: 04/15/06 12:30
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

This wasn`t in "In the Eyes of Others". Well if it was it wouldn`t be here. Silly me. I like it.

Author's Response: I couldn't quite make it fit the general line somehow. There's a couple of other spinoff fics pending, when I start to feel as though they're done. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 04/15/06 4:12
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

I really enjoyed this! The story was well written and had the air of a young Snape captured perfectly. I liked the way you wrote this from a different angle to most MWPP stories, by making Snape and Lily friends. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks, rita! I liked the idea of him very discreetly doing something so utterly flamboyant; it seemed to work with other Severus moments we've seen, somehow. This is one of the few stories I've posted that came out of a dream, and I just had to keep that pipe organ in the Great Hall even if nobody else has ever spotted it.

Reviewer: RainDancer
Date: 04/14/06 21:40
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

I like how you had Severus and Lilly as friends. All in all, I think it was rather sweet and enjoyable.

Author's Response: "Friends" makes the most sense to me from the books so far. *stops self from 100-page text analysis* Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 04/14/06 17:39
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

haha i loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: xenophiliac
Date: 04/14/06 17:38
Chapter: Happy Birthday, Lily Evans

"Happy Birthday" and she didn't tell him? Then again she is good with secrets....I'm kind of surprised....It was cute and snapey, kind of refreshing to see Snape back in school (in referance to the loooong snape fic that I am sorry i haven't finished yet). lol good work

Author's Response: Hello again! In the course of writing the looooong fic, I ended up with all these little odds and ends that didn't fit into the main story line and yet were too good not to tell somewhere. This was one of them. And no, somehow their birthdays just never came up in conversation. Thanks for reviewing!

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