Reviews For Come Back...
Reviewer: GWeaz
Date: 04/15/06 18:48
Chapter: Come Back...

This was a very good story. I think that the way you had Ginny acting was very good, even though I generally like her to take more action I didn't mind yours. You were able to make her very human, someone that we all can relate to. Excellent job!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much :D I know what you mean when having her do more, but when I get certain idea into my head I really have to write it almost identical. But I'm glad that you think it was fine :) As long as we can relate to love, we are all humans :)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 04/15/06 16:53
Chapter: Come Back...

This was another very touching story. I really enjoyed the emotion in it. You can feel Ginny's pain and they way Harry gets strength from having her words reach her. I look forward to more of your stories!

Author's Response: Hi again Cheshlin :D I was crossing my fingers for the readers to get that message. That's all this story is about. The emotion between to lovers, the wait, the uncertainty, and the hope. Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: prongs12433
Date: 04/14/06 20:13
Chapter: Come Back...

Wow, that was really different! In a good way of course. There wasn't really any action, but it was still a great one shot. Your writing is very beautiful, and it just sort of flows. Great job!! 10/10! *goes to look at AstroFire's other fics*

Author's Response: Hi prongs12433! Thank you very much :D I like this one a lot, maybe because it is personal. Yes, you are right; it doesn't really has any action and yet it does. I wanted to focus the readers' attention into their feelings, their thoughts, and their hopes. Again, thank you very much for your review, and I hope you like what you found too :)

Reviewer: summer time girl
Date: 04/14/06 19:18
Chapter: Come Back...

auhh thats so sweet, i really liked it good job

Author's Response: Thank you very much summer time girl :D I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Librawitch
Date: 04/14/06 10:45
Chapter: Come Back...

Your descriptions are beautiful. They give such a beautiful, detailed image.

I love your writing, basically.

Author's Response: Hi Librawitch. Thank you very much :D I liked this story particularly because I had that image in my head and I think I could finally write it down the way I wanted. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 04/13/06 16:40
Chapter: Come Back...

omigosh!!!!! this was soooo sweet!!!! make this chaptered!!!!!!!!!!!! update!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hi AurorGirl :D Aw, I don't know if I could make it chaptered :) The thing is that I "feel" it should end here; another chapter would brake a little bit the atmosphere. Sorry :/ but you could always check my other stories ;)

Reviewer: Mr Hermione Granger
Date: 04/13/06 3:36
Chapter: Come Back...

Wow! This story is so heart felt! The emotions are described so beautifully! You can almost feel the love Ginny and Harry have! I love this story! It may be short but there is definitely a lot of content! I find myself once again saying this score to no surprise, 10/10! It is certainly well deserved! I'm practically speechless!

Author's Response: Hi dan! Once again, I feel I don't deserve such kind words. Thank you! Well, as an author I don't like to compare my work, but I have to say I like this one very much! I hadn't even planned exactly what to write; I was listening to the song and then I just started to create the scenes in my mind, so I quickly rushed for my laptop and started writing it down :D I'm very, very glad you liked it!

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