aw very good. and omg. is James okay? he better be.
hey, it looked like you weren't getting too many reviews so i thought i'd write one!
i can't believe snape tried to torture james! oooh, i hate him! i loved the "colourful feather duster" thing. the story is original, quirky and funny. i like it!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I kind of lack reviews...but it's people like you that fix that! Yes, we share a hatred of Severus, but, then again, lots of people do after the Half-blood Prince...I'm glad you liked the feather duster thing. I don't know how much longer this story'll last, as I have serious writer's block, but I hope to add a roleplay my friends and I have been working on. Keep your eyes open for another story!
I like the reference to tennis :D
I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much! I plan on updating as soon as I can. Thanks again for the review!
wow! I'm speechless!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you very much for reviewing!
YAY! I love it! :D So keep writing? Pleeeeeeeease?
Only problem was that it was kinda short? But I shouldn't be talking cause my chapters are sooo short it's pathetic. Anyways just keep writing! See ya in school!
~Tiller
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I know it was kind of short, but I thought it was a good point to cut off at, but the next one will probably be longer. Thanks again, Prongs!
So... here is the mystery fic! I liked it a lot. I thought you had pretty well re-created the atmosphere, with everybidy rushing to board the train and the accidents occuring in all the confusion... Snape was his usual, unpleasant self, and all in all, you had most of the characters right. Most of them. I think maybe you're a bit partial to James (wouldn't blame you for that, I've got a soft spot for him as well). They're fifteen, right? we should see more of the arrogant, bullying side of the fifteen-year-old James. Maybe you should have developed (are there two 'p' in 'developed'? I can never tell) the duel a bit more... James looked a bit too much like a victim, what with Snape sending Unforgivable curses at him. Ah, but you have all the time in the world for that. Just thought I'd point it out.The story looks like it's going to be good... update soon!
Author's Response: Why thank you very much! This story is somewhat centered around James, but the other marauders will have their due glory. This is actually the first fic I've ever written, so I'm glad you like it! Yes, developed has only one 'p' in it. About the duel, I'm really not very good at writing about duels; my pen can't keep up with my mind. I will try to update as soon as possible, as I am working on this during my free periods at school. Thanks again for the review!!!
