Ok, my review didn't work for some reason. What I was going to say was:
Ok, I read this because I really wanted to leave you more reviews on your awesome writing prowess, but sadly I know about l-l that much about poetry, unless it rhymes or is written by Shakespeare. Anyway, excellent imagery, I felt very bad for Hermione. It looked good to me!! *hangs head in not-good-with-poetry-reviews shame*
-Gryffinpuff
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review Ashley. It doesn't matter what you know about poetry as long as you like it :-)
Ok, I read this because I really wanted to leave you more reviews on your awesome writing prowess, but sadly I know about l-l
Author's Response: Ooops
Another fab poem! I saw the banner for this one too somewhere. Maybe it was Queen Hals? Anyway, my favorite line was the last one. It is so.. strong. It really has a great way of ending it. Denying yourself the privilage of loving someone. That sounds so sad, but I guess that's why its soo beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks. I was sporting the banner in my sig before 'Overlooked', that's probably where you saw it ;-)
Very interesting and very sad. I liked it and I think it flowed very nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Great job. Yeah, I need to go read the original by QueenHal. Good job. It is a bit short, but otherwise very nice.HermyRox12
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Hermy. Sorry that I'm cutting it a bit short, but I'm ill :-(
