Reviewer: Gryffinpuff
Date: 07/12/06 15:10
Chapter: In a desolate Land of Black and Blue

Ok, my review didn't work for some reason. What I was going to say was:
Ok, I read this because I really wanted to leave you more reviews on your awesome writing prowess, but sadly I know about l-l that much about poetry, unless it rhymes or is written by Shakespeare. Anyway, excellent imagery, I felt very bad for Hermione. It looked good to me!! *hangs head in not-good-with-poetry-reviews shame*
-Gryffinpuff

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review Ashley. It doesn't matter what you know about poetry as long as you like it :-)

Reviewer: Gryffinpuff
Date: 07/12/06 15:07
Chapter: In a desolate Land of Black and Blue

Ok, I read this because I really wanted to leave you more reviews on your awesome writing prowess, but sadly I know about l-l

Author's Response: Ooops

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 04/22/06 10:22
Chapter: In a desolate Land of Black and Blue

Another fab poem! I saw the banner for this one too somewhere. Maybe it was Queen Hals? Anyway, my favorite line was the last one. It is so.. strong. It really has a great way of ending it. Denying yourself the privilage of loving someone. That sounds so sad, but I guess that's why its soo beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was sporting the banner in my sig before 'Overlooked', that's probably where you saw it ;-)

Reviewer: herm_own_ninny_rox
Date: 04/19/06 18:59
Chapter: In a desolate Land of Black and Blue

Very interesting and very sad. I liked it and I think it flowed very nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you :-)

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 04/08/06 21:21
Chapter: In a desolate Land of Black and Blue

Great job. Yeah, I need to go read the original by QueenHal. Good job. It is a bit short, but otherwise very nice.

HermyRox12

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Hermy. Sorry that I'm cutting it a bit short, but I'm ill :-(

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