MORE! I WANT MORE....LOTS MORE.
that was funny, inventive and well written (kinda like ur penname, which i love btw) :D
ummm... wow. great start :)
Love it! =D please update
I loved it!!! Especially James, he's so awesome, I loved how you portrayed him.
This story is in my favourites now so feel very proud :)
Makes me wish i had written it! You did an awesome job, have you written anything else? I shall go check...
Looking forward to the updates!
heehee, I love it!! update update update!! please? pretty please? beautiful please? ravishingly beautiful please? *does puppy dog eyes*
i LIKE it! ssstop it i LIKE it! ssssstop ssssstop i like it i LIKE it!
ooooooooo! great story
i love it! how soon r u going to update???
im sorry, but i thought you were gonna update soon! was the chapter rejected????
hahahahahaha! I loved it! I loved the fact that since Lily was trying to over rule James, he just said "That's it!" and kissed her!!! Well done! Tha was fantastic and I can't wait to read more!
Update quick! I really like this story...
I really really really like it! keep it up! this is great! i love how he just pulled her into his arms, and she totally lost it, lol i wish guys really did do things like that!
why J.POTTER is OOC?
more more more more!lol
Definately wasn't expected but it was good id like to read the rest when it come out. all i can say is that that was interesting way to win an argument
that was nice!! i like the whole scene where lily puts her hand to her face and all.. very inspiring.. hahha.. i can't wait to see what happens.. maybe he'll go talk to her or something.. and he'll kiss her.. yup.. yup.. well, i can't wait.. good luck though.. and hurry!!
intresting start cant wait for the next chappie
oh wow! that was absa lutely a great first chapter. heck, that was a great chapter in general! update soon!
woah. that was totally origional....i loved it. this is going to be a great story. i can't wait for the next chapters. wow, that was just so great. just update asap.
Woah. Never seen James and Lily do anything like that before... I liked it. Original.
That was good but happened a little quickly. Also it wasn't that descriptive, a little more detail will be helpful.