MORE! I WANT MORE....LOTS MORE.
that was funny, inventive and well written (kinda like ur penname, which i love btw) :D
I loved it!!! Especially James, he's so awesome, I loved how you portrayed him.
This story is in my favourites now so feel very proud :)
Makes me wish i had written it! You did an awesome job, have you written anything else? I shall go check...
Looking forward to the updates!
Penny
heehee, I love it!! update update update!! please? pretty please? beautiful please? ravishingly beautiful please? *does puppy dog eyes*
i LIKE it! ssstop it i LIKE it! ssssstop ssssstop i like it i LIKE it!
ooooooooo! great story
i love it! how soon r u going to update???
im sorry, but i thought you were gonna update soon! was the chapter rejected????
hahahahahaha! I loved it! I loved the fact that since Lily was trying to over rule James, he just said "That's it!" and kissed her!!! Well done! Tha was fantastic and I can't wait to read more!
Update quick! I really like this story...
I really really really like it! keep it up! this is great! i love how he just pulled her into his arms, and she totally lost it, lol i wish guys really did do things like that!
Definately wasn't expected but it was good id like to read the rest when it come out. all i can say is that that was interesting way to win an argument
that was nice!! i like the whole scene where lily puts her hand to her face and all.. very inspiring.. hahha.. i can't wait to see what happens.. maybe he'll go talk to her or something.. and he'll kiss her.. yup.. yup.. well, i can't wait.. good luck though.. and hurry!!
intresting start cant wait for the next chappie
oh wow! that was absa lutely a great first chapter. heck, that was a great chapter in general! update soon!
woah. that was totally origional....i loved it. this is going to be a great story. i can't wait for the next chapters. wow, that was just so great. just update asap.
Woah. Never seen James and Lily do anything like that before... I liked it. Original.
That was good but happened a little quickly. Also it wasn't that descriptive, a little more detail will be helpful.