Reviews For As the Dusk Grows
Reviewer: Mr Hermione Granger
Date: 04/05/06 13:25
Chapter: As the Dusk Grows

Another superb piece of work! I really enjoyed reading it! It's amazing what can just pop out of peoples' heads sometimes! I especially love how you have described Voldemort's thoughts through out the story and of course the descriptions of Voldemort himself! The way you use words is truly amazing! I can imagine everything that was written and the emotions have been so well described! Definitely another well deserved 10/10!

Author's Response: Hi Mr Hermione Granger! :D Well, I didn't actually plan to write Voldemort's POV, but somehow it just flowed when I was writing it. I'm glad that you found it believable as sometimes that is not achieved :) Thank you a lot for reviewing! Your words are always most encouraging. Good luck with your soon-to-come story! I'm eager to read it :)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 04/05/06 10:42
Chapter: As the Dusk Grows

Another story that was great! There were only a few spelling errors. Other then that it was a very powerful story of love! I think you had the cockiness of James and the strength of Lily perfect! :)

Author's Response: Hi again Cheshlin :D Well, thank you very much! I was very nervous because I had never wrote them down, so I wasn't sure if I was up to it. Unfortunately this story hasn't been beta-ed yet :/ The thing is that I wrote this story in almost 1 day, but my beta is still working with the first chapter of the long story, so I couldn't also send this to her. But I hope she'll be able to have a look to it soon :) Thanks again, Cheshlin!

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/05/06 5:08
Chapter: As the Dusk Grows

This was interesting, I loved the use of words. Words are very powerful things! This was very emotional (just what I like!!) Please keep writing, you're fantastic!!

Author's Response: Hi. Thank you :) Well, I do like the stories to be very emotional, and the choice of words will have a great value when adding emotion to it. Glad that you liked it :D

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