I really liked this story, you captured Ron's charecter quite well. It's short though.
Funny! I would definitely like to see more!
he he .... i wonder of boys REALLY practice with pillows.... its just a thought....
damn.. I still laugh and I read the story 10 minutes ago. It`s soo funny . :D Practising with the pillow .. =)) i had to read it two times to be sure that I read it correctly.
So sweet! I knew Hermione would never say such a thing! :)
That was deff awesome! It was almost as if JKR wrote it herself, which is very rare i find...
haha for a moment in the bathroom i thought harry was going to suggest he practice withhh him!! lol
This is really funny and has a nice ending. Normally I don't read single stories but it was under featured stories so I decided to give it a try. I'm glad I did! ;-)
That's very cute! Nicely done.
Hahaha! That was so funny! I loved it.
That is a brilliant laugh. I couldn't stop reading it until I got right to the end. I love the way youve still kept in with what J.K writes but added your own twist to the tale. Its perfect.x
Funny, but you could have made it clearer whether or not Harry was serious. It sometimes seemed like a long string of dialogue with little narration in between, which is a pity since I really liked the narration you did do.
Really kewl story, nice try to twist it but I kinda saw that coming.Keep writing more n more rockin stuff man
hahaha hilarious! awesome one shot i must say
That was so funny, so cute, and so like Ron. I was confused a little by Harry saying his pillow was Cho. Do you mean he practiced on the pillow pretending it was her, and now the image stuck? Anyway, great story!!
HAHA! Classic. Tres bien.
HAHAHAHAHA! Ron snoggind his pillow! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That is SOOO funny!
there is one thing i can say 'LOL!'
Thee letters: LOL
Very funny. Very very funny.
lol, this was funny and cute and sweet...well done :)
hehe. ADOREABLE! Just...adoreable! Sweet and shippery and cute. Love it. And Harry still having trouble sleeping 'cause he thinks his pillow is Cho? LOL!