Its really very hard to imagine Ron and Hermione not together. But good shot according to the song.
It is very well matched to the song and HP And very well written, but as usuall for me i like it when R and H are together.
get them together -growls- evil person ron and mione foreva
Loved the storyl! You're Beautiful is one of my favorite songs, and I love the way you put the Fic with the song. JAMES BLUNT ROCKS! I would have liked it better, though, if you had put *Flying* rather than Fucking. But the story was still great.
that was one of the most beatiful stories ive read!!!!!!!!!!!
wow, that was really good. the only thing is that i cant beleive that ron would be an auror. i thought of him more as , oh, i dont know, like his dad. exept not so obsessed with muggle stuff. Please, Please write more stuff!!
Oh, how sad.
At first, when Hermione mentioned the children alone with their father I was thinking that she was recently divorced, and that there was hope. But then..there wasn't.
I was going to say something about the fact that Hermione would never do that to the boys. Even if she did go off and marry another man (which she wouldn't) she would still keep in touch with them. But, this is an AU story.
Well, I have to say, the emotion in this is beautfully written. I could completely feel Ron's pain, and I swear my heart started to beat faster.
I know it is based on a song, but yuck! I don't want to read about them not being together! Still it was very well written and a good read. Grade: B-.
aww that was soooo sad, poor old ron!
anyway, great job i loved it keep up the good work.
p.s: maybe u should have noted the language but otherwise the rating was fine
You did fine I loved it!! thanx, ~Cara~/Lunalovy ;P
awww that was horrible....i mean the plot-not the writing-
Yaaaaaah!!! You need to continue this and make Ron and Hermione together!!!
Wow, totally not what I was expecting! Are those really Hermione's children? Because I would think that Ron would know if she was married!!! Really sad but really good all the same.
perfect song....perfect story...perfect evrything.u really captured ron's heartbroken side with out revealing it too much.i didn't have an account until i saw this story.i just had to review it.
perfect song....perfect story...perfect evrything.u really captured ron's heartbroken side with out revealing it too much.i didn't have an account until i saw this story.i just had to review it.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks! :D
Oh and PS to anyone who has heard the "flying high" version, that is the censored version the real is actually with a swear word. I was playing it in on media player and my little bro walked by so i had to turn it down quickly, lol!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for letting us know ;)
