Reviewer: secretkneazle
Date: 01/04/07 3:02
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

Hmmmn is this meant to be like something Hannah would write in her diary or something? Sorry mate but not really my cup of tea. That's not to say that I didn't enjoy some parts, the ending was really good but it sounded a bit like "then I did this, then I did that" sorry to be so negative but i like to be honest!

Author's Response: No, thank you...I wrote this quiet a while ago, and i just recently re-read it and i was thinking "why did i write this?" yes, now I probably wouldn't, no Couldn't write something like this....I appreciate your thoughts....maybe you would like my other story better?....Thanks

Reviewer: lupinslover
Date: 11/28/06 17:53
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

Oh dear....i'm commenting my self...well i need it....wow, i must have been in a sappy mood when i wrote this....i cant believe i wrote this...oh well...best learn from my own mistakes...

Author's Response: jesh...that is a low for me...commenting my self that's almost as bad as talking to my self...oh wait nvm i do that too...hehe

Reviewer: toreadistolive
Date: 06/28/06 2:46
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

I LOVE HANNAH! She's the greatest. Loved the story.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!! i like hanna too, she is just not my favorite character.

Reviewer: MorganRay
Date: 05/10/06 21:15
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

This is a very insightful look into Hannah Abbott. She's just something of a two-dimensional character in the books, but Jo has hinted she has depth. It's good to see you bring it out with her flashbacks of her family. Her conversation with Ernie was short, but yet, sometimes, just a word can strike a person when they're in the right mood. You've shown this very well by how she thinks. Hannah is a strong person, but also, I think she has a soft side, and you show her vulnerbility and her strenght. Her wanting to be an auror and having survivor's guilt is also very realistic. This is an excellent piece, even for a one-shot, and contains a decent amount of character growth for its length.

Author's Response: Wow, Did you really think that....hummm I guess i can't really see it in my own writing......

Reviewer: Magical Maeve
Date: 05/05/06 13:00
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

This is a lovely little examination of grief and of coming to terms with it. There is such a nice lift at the end that it makes you feel very fuzzy and warm. I particularly loved this line...

I cried for all that is to come and all that has already come to pass, good or bad. Deep inside myself I know deep, deep down itís going to be all right.

I thought that was really moving and nicely written. Well done!

Author's Response: THank you sooo much, I just thought of some of the thing my friends have been through *not like they compare* and thought of that, though i'm not quite sure where it came from, but thank you

Reviewer: HermyRox12
Date: 04/09/06 18:04
Chapter: Hannah's Worries

This is sweet. I like it. The only thing is that I'm not quite sure that everyone would know about the Horcruxs. I mean, if word got out, Voldemort would know then move them and/or create new ones. Other than that, 10/10. Can't wait to see more from you. HermyRox12

Author's Response: thank you, have you read my L/J fic? well the first chapter at least...but the scond one should be in the Q in no time...

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