Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 07/22/06 0:41
Chapter: Do Be Mine for the Dark Lord's Sake

Awww...poor Bella. You write her and Rodulphus pretty similar to me, although my main fic about them hasn't been validated yet. I think the guy is a total *tries to think of nasty enough word and fails* but you get the idea.


Anyway, I really enjoyed this. I loved the bit about the little boy. And the line about Lucius not wanting fiflth like her in his house has somehow really stuck in my mind. Very excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 07/20/06 12:32
Chapter: Do Be Mine for the Dark Lord's Sake

Don't you know I'm sensitive? I am prone to cry over fic like that!!! This was beautiful, not my take on Bella/Rodolphus, but still beautiful. I liked your characterization of the two very much and the part with the Muggle boy in the alleyway was my favorite part, and it also almost caused me to have a heart attack, which wasn't your fault. Like I said, I'm sensitive. The last line tied things up very nicely, yes, and your fluency was brilliant. Now excuse me, I need to go get a Kleenex.

Author's Response: LOL, Thanks.

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 07/10/06 22:44
Chapter: Do Be Mine for the Dark Lord's Sake

That was really good. I only saw one mistake ( AI think it was one...) when you said It was already four o’clock in the morning and you also put It’s three o’clock in the morning, and you’re claiming that you haven’t had anything to eat?’ but other than that it was great. That was the first Dark fic Ive read and I think Ill give some more a try. Awesome!!!


Author's Response: I'll try to fix that problem as soon as I can. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

Reviewer: Kari1980
Date: 04/15/06 0:02
Chapter: Do Be Mine for the Dark Lord's Sake

I liked this -- It's a very interesting take on how Bellatrix became the monster that she became. It answers the question of was she born this way? -- Or did something happen that transformed her into a cold-hearted killer? Very impressive writing style, by the way. By the time you're my age you should be a master of the written word.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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