Reviews For Hardest Word
Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/19/07 3:28
Chapter: Hardest Word

Sadness. :( Good fic.

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/25/06 0:35
Chapter: Hardest Word

But- what- Siri- I- WHAT??? That's the worst idea ever!!!! I've been in a stupor for the past 20 minutes because I'm really tired and you sure as hell woke me out of it. God. That's awful. That's- great. I can definitely see Sirius doing somethign like that. Even though that's a bloody depressing story. Wow. That's... I love this. I- just wow. This is bloody awesome.

Reviewer: TohmaSakuma
Date: 05/18/06 17:24
Chapter: Hardest Word

AWW THAT MADE ME CRY,......why couldn't pettigrew die instead...he is uglt WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP KILLING MY SIRIUS

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 03/20/05 14:23
Chapter: Hardest Word

I think that twas very original and that goodbye is indeed the hardest word to say. Superb job! You might like my fan fic A Very Sirius Full Moon since tis a Remus/Sirius story about what happened when James actually did save Snape.

Reviewer: Masterlupin
Date: 03/01/05 7:14
Chapter: Hardest Word

It's sweet... But i don't think it ever will happen! Of course it never happened, but what i mean is that Remus would probably die if Moony was taken away from him like that...

Reviewer: Tonx
Date: 02/28/05 21:55
Chapter: Hardest Word

I liked it, great ideas. But I agree with the others, you did seem to rush a little bit. And I'm just wondering but what made you decide to write this story.? Good JOb!!:)

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 12/10/04 12:36
Chapter: Hardest Word

Well, it was a bit confusing and I felt you rushed it a bit towards the end. However, it was an interesting plot and I thought you had Sirius' character down very well. Despite being rushed, the ending was really quite sad. Overall, a good fic.

Reviewer: hpwebbie
Date: 12/04/04 9:25
Chapter: Hardest Word

Sorry, but you really need to work on your transitions. One minute they were 16 and the next James has a wife and son? That confused me alot. Instead of just putting the *** say "several years later" or something. You should also work on adding filler and description to your story. Everything happens so quickly in them, Remus practically ran into the church. You should've spent more time perhaps describing the church, and describing people's feelings and expressions.

Reviewer: Bella
Date: 12/03/04 23:43
Chapter: Hardest Word

Interesting.... You aren't by any chance Wiccan are you?

Reviewer: Atarwyn
Date: 12/03/04 20:55
Chapter: Hardest Word

Umm.... Right.... Sorry but... Hmmm....

Reviewer: xDoubleTrouble13
Date: 12/03/04 14:32
Chapter: Hardest Word

Very umm creative.. nice story..

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