Reviews For Self Analysis
Reviewer: OhISee
Date: 04/21/06 22:10
Chapter: Prologue

Look at me! I finally got to read this. I really enjoyed it. I must say, my friend, your grammar has come a long way. There's only a few typos that I would nitpick over, but nothing major. Yay for you and your brilliance. The 'self-analysis' of the character is great. Her musings are very believable and I think a lot of readers would be able to relate to her. I really liked her wish to be a fictional character, with no complications or heart ache. Bravo!

Author's Response: =D because she's such a bookworm, she wanst to be a character =) Thank you SO much for stopping by! Typos are hopefully reducing in size, and grammer? All thanks to you! ♥

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 04/15/06 21:11
Chapter: Prologue

see, see! I said I would go review! it's about thirty seconds after I told you I would (It took my desktop a while to load up). I know who the "mystery person" is!

But only cause you told me so.

10/10!

Juli

Author's Response: Heheh damn slow internet! I could have had this rveiew 0.05 seconds faster! Is it easier to navigate now, do you think?

Author's Response: "I see! I see!" said the Blind man to the deaf dog.

Reviewer: lukyduky14
Date: 04/15/06 12:18
Chapter: Prologue

I'd say Hermione, judging by the banner lol. But I like how you leave it open. Because you're not really describing a character, you're describing an emotion that someone is feeling. An emotion we've all had at some point in our lives. So, by not giving the character a name, you're letting us relate better to what you're trying to say. If that makes sense lol. Anyway, love ya huh!
~Nicole [ps, what happened to the rating thing by the review?]

Author's Response: "...you're describing an emotion that someone is feeling. An emotion we've all had at some point in our lives." Si, comrade. And yes, your review was right on spot. Kudos for the uber tuned in Nicole! And I dunno. But some of the new MNFF makes me sad =(

Reviewer: murgatroid
Date: 04/10/06 1:02
Chapter: Prologue

hehe... i know who it is :D but coz you told me, it would be cheating if i spoilt it for every one. HAHA you can all figure it out for yourselves!!!! (insert evil and *ahem* malicious laugh) (omg, that was possibly the lamest joke i have said all day...) YAY!!! Lurid has a new story up!!! i didnt know it was going to be a longer one, though steph, how long are you planing it to be? How much can you write on an angsty #####... oops, i almost gave it away... Great story though :D

Author's Response: well, i had planned it as a one-shot, but then i thought "hey! Why not do something different, i'm sick of one-shots!" and decided to make it a Three chapter story Gah, dman you fringe. I just got my hair cut, and the fringe is annoying. [and too short] ("/) Thanks Kali!

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