Fun to read! Continue! Best wishes, Sunny
You have got to finish this.
OK... so Avonmora and Ana are sisters and nieces of Snape? Right?
Very interesting... from what I've read it sounds like Draco's already desperately in love with Ana and Mora.... and he'll have a hard time hiding it. Can't wait to read the rest!
Author of "Child of the Raven"
Who dose/did Draco love Ana or Mora?
I loved the story Please update!
WHAT!?! He killed her?!?!!
Bravo. Very good job with this story so far. I really enjoy the way that you write. It's descriptive, but not overpowering. Keep up the good work! *10*
An interesting theory you've got here. I don't believe I've ever seen one with Snape having a neice. It's still a interesting concept, nonetheless.
Because it's just the prologue, I obviouly haven't seen much of your OC yet, but I'm drawn to her already. Even with the small amount of dialogue she has I can tell you have her well thought out in your mind. Of course, her name is a bit of a mouthful, but you've given her a nickname so that shouyld be fine.
So far, this seems pretty good. You've really got me wondering a lot about your plot, like what relationship Draco and Mora had and how she got into her current situation. I'm rather hooked, now, and I'm anxious to see where you go with this next.
Keep up the good work, because I'm adding this to my favorites. You've just got me so dang curious! A very nice job, on this chapter.