Such a great story! Really captures the characters of H, Hr, and R perfectly (which hardly ever happens). Fits so easily into the books too (DH disregarded, of course). I can't believe I'd never commented on this piece before, since it's been a favorite for years. Still holds up, one of the absolute best.
awww...that was so cute!! great job!
So sorry to leave a 2nd one, but have you ever thought about writing Ginny and Harry's story from this context, where Ron and Herimone are already together after this story?
Haha, that was great! I could totally see that happening! Loved it!
yay ron and mione woo hoo wow a record 2 stories in a row where mione didnt die thankyou
This is really good. How come you only made one chapter? I want more! I need more!
That is EXACTLY how I pictured Ron and Hermione's first kiss... not saying that I didn't like it in DH because the book is so awesome!! But anyway, I love how Harry's, like, there, but he's not, in a matter of speaking. I'm just so happy that I've found the perfect R/H one chaptered fightong/kissing scene/story that I've seen all day. I'm just like, Oh my god!! It's so cool!! I'm just gonna shutup now. (lol)
Keep writing... you're sweet!!
I LOVE IT!!! Seriously, I laughed through the whole thing, it was so good. So far this fanfic is the only one I've read that I truly feel captured Rowling's wit and voice through the third person-limited point of view. This one's going into my favorites!
such a great story fits into the plot just right
such a great story fits into the plot just right
That was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! For a second I thought Ron and Hermione were gonna hex each other or something...
AMAZING.
i absolutely loved it
Great story! I'd always wanted to see some kind of actual argument between Ron and Hermione over Viktor, and I like how you tied Harry and his "feelings" into the mix.
How cute! Are you going to write a follow up? That would be brilliant! Like another one-shot with Harry and Ginny!?! But, anyways, this one was great! 10/10
thats really good.... you used the language that harry ron and hermionie would have used... other stories dont manage to do that
well done!
I loved it! I think you have a fantastic grasp of the characters and a nice writing style. Would love to read more from you.
I liked how it flopped between seriousness (no, I dont care that seriousness may or may not be a word) and humor. *applauds loudly*
