Reviews For Pencil
Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/06/06 16:47
Chapter: Pencil

Not a smarty, metaphorical, this-is-a-poem poem, but a very cute poem. It's like Jo's lament on her train to London, with this whole world forming it her head, and no... pencil!

Author's Response: I am so familiar with that feeling because I never have a damn pen!

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 10/07/06 11:31
Chapter: Pencil

-hands you a pencil-
Now you have a pencil.
LOL.
8.5/10!
But it should be rhyming, I think.

Author's Response: I have issues with rhymes, but I've done a Draco/Ginny that turned out to be rhymed.

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/28/06 16:49
Chapter: Pencil

I like that! You should write another poem that actually /is/ the story. Or a fic or memorandum or something.

Author's Response: I wish I could actually make a plot bunny grow into a plot rabbit, but alas, I cannot.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/22/06 19:13
Chapter: Pencil

This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The girl in question is Ginny, and I enjoy writing in pencil better than in pen, I have no idea why.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/22/06 19:13
Chapter: Pencil

This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!

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