Reviews For Pencil
Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/06/06 16:47
Chapter: Pencil

Not a smarty, metaphorical, this-is-a-poem poem, but a very cute poem. It's like Jo's lament on her train to London, with this whole world forming it her head, and no... pencil!

Author's Response: I am so familiar with that feeling because I never have a damn pen!

Reviewer: RiddleHatred
Date: 10/07/06 11:31
Chapter: Pencil

-hands you a pencil-
Now you have a pencil.
LOL.
8.5/10!
But it should be rhyming, I think.

Author's Response: I have issues with rhymes, but I've done a Draco/Ginny that turned out to be rhymed.

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/28/06 16:49
Chapter: Pencil

I like that! You should write another poem that actually /is/ the story. Or a fic or memorandum or something.

Author's Response: I wish I could actually make a plot bunny grow into a plot rabbit, but alas, I cannot.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/22/06 19:13
Chapter: Pencil

This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The girl in question is Ginny, and I enjoy writing in pencil better than in pen, I have no idea why.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 04/22/06 19:13
Chapter: Pencil

This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Epithalamium by Squibstress Professors
Minerva McGonagall is a bright, talented witch with dreams of becoming the first...
The Marred Boy by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
The two Marauders who were outcasts in their own homes. I am Padfoot11333...
A Seer Named Rosemary Snape by PlutoLovegood 3rd-5th Years
In 2018 Neville and Harry deliver a Hogwarts acceptance letter to Rosemary Snape...
FEATURED
whimper by psijupiter 6th-7th Years
I play to my strengths. As do we all. In the midst of the first wizarding...
Over A Mug of Tea by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
I think of her as a sister. The words rang clearly, loudly in his mind. I...
Gaps Between by lucca4 6th-7th Years
Falling in love teaches Dennis Creevey that sometimes, needing someone isn't...
To Fear the Flame by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
Neville hadn't expected his boggart to ever change. Perhaps he should have done.
Good King Ragnuk by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Ragnuk, King of the Goblins and master silversmith, forged a sword for Godric...
CATEGORIES