Not a smarty, metaphorical, this-is-a-poem poem, but a very cute poem. It's like Jo's lament on her train to London, with this whole world forming it her head, and no... pencil!
Author's Response: I am so familiar with that feeling because I never have a damn pen!
-hands you a pencil-
Now you have a pencil.
LOL.
8.5/10!
But it should be rhyming, I think.
Author's Response: I have issues with rhymes, but I've done a Draco/Ginny that turned out to be rhymed.
I like that! You should write another poem that actually /is/ the story. Or a fic or memorandum or something.
Author's Response: I wish I could actually make a plot bunny grow into a plot rabbit, but alas, I cannot.
This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The girl in question is Ginny, and I enjoy writing in pencil better than in pen, I have no idea why.
This is a cute idea! It's sort of like JKR's lament. Who is this girl in question? I think this poem isn't exactly a high quality, sophisticated work, but it's very cute. I just want to point out- most authors use pens, and fanfic authors use keyboards! Anyway, great job! This story made me smile, and I can give you no higher praise than that!