this chapter is not corny no matter what the author says. i think it is very sweet and sentimental.
Hey I usually save reviws until the last chapter but I just wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job ⚡
Hey I usually save reviws until the last chapter but I just wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job ⚡
I am sad that it is over now...though I suppose the sequel will help. :D
I do like what you did to Malfoy to! Ha ha, the little ferret deserves it :D
I like the fact of Harr being the Heir of Gryffindor..I love this story!
I like that destination, New Zealand, :D first story ive read that mention it.
I really loved this story! You had me in tears when I read the chapter where they were saying how they felt for those who had died.
Just started to read this tonight. Its really good.
I've just read this entire fic in one evening, I just couldn't stop. I've felt such a range of emotions throughout this story and that proves how brilliantly written it was, as many readers will agree, if a story leaves you feeling indifferent then the author hasn't done their job. I'm now feeling very conflicted, I'm so happy it's all over and they can finally live, but it pains me to see the losses, even Snape. I'm also very apprehensive with regards to the sequel, that spoiler doesn't sound too good for someone. Right, very well done and i'm off to start book two.
lol, its funny, reading what Dumbledore says to Harry about losing a girl he loved. Cuz, he's Gay and all. great story though!!
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If yuo do write for the readers, then write more,more,more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this chapter was sorta short
Interesting first chapter! Cant wait to read more :)
Great story can't wait to read sequel. It was a regular blood bath in the last few chapters.
I only had one real problem with anything in the entire story. "Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak!" that is perhaps my favorite quote from HP, sorry, but I have to say that you royally screwed it up ("They are Nitwit. Oddment. Blubber. And tweak." what is the deal with that).
Other than that it was great.
I am tempted to give you 1 out of 10 stars for that glitch. OK, not really. 8 out of 10. I prefer more Harry/Ginny, but you know whatever floats your boat. :-)
Ya, great story. Not trying to point out mistakes but isn't Madam Malkin's in Diagon Alley, not Hogsmeade?