Reviewer: MysticalMayhem
Date: 09/02/08 14:12
Chapter: One

The idea of Snape/Harry definitely disturbs me..but you write it very well. Great job, I loved it. :D

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a go despite the pairing ;o) And thanks for reviewing! ~H

Reviewer: charliegirl85
Date: 10/20/07 4:36
Chapter: Unwinding

To be honest, that disturbed me on levels I didn't know existed, but it was very intriguing at the same time. The whole Harry/Snape dynamic is a challenging one, and like I said, disturbing. But this was very well written. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, charliegirl ;o) I completely understand it being disturbing because I had quite a time with it myself. I didn't know whether I really wanted to *go there*, but once I started writing, the words and ideas just flowed, so I went with it. I've always thought of Harry/Snape's dynamic as being one built on distrust and mutual dislike, so the challenge was to get past that somehow. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~HH

Reviewer: hobesan
Date: 09/20/07 23:16
Chapter: One

Great story. Even though I tend to ship HP/HG, most romance fics, of all genre, are so insipid. The mind rape and the mental angst, delicious.

Author's Response: Thanks! I can't see these two characters (in this story) being insipid - it's just not... them! ;o) I'm an angst-lover myself, and I'm happy you sailed another ship, if only briefly ! ;o) ~HH

Reviewer: Leona MacEwan
Date: 08/15/07 15:24
Chapter: Unwinding

On some level SS/HP together is disturbing...HOWEVER, this is nicely done. A lot of slash either doesn't quite get the male/male relationship right or if it does it doesn't get the characters right. In your case, kudos, Harry was Harry and Snape was Snape and while alternative you made a convincing interaction. Write more. How about Lupin and Snape? Nicely written!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for braving the Snarry world and reading/reviewing! ;o) The initial version of this story was much more physical and graphic, and while I like it just as much, this version took much more out of me to write. As for Snupin... *dances with joy* check out my stories at The Petulant Poetess. You may have to join in order to read them though, since they're mainly NC-17

Reviewer: harmony123
Date: 06/10/07 23:05
Chapter: Unwinding

omg i loved this story, i really did

i love snape i really do, love love love snape i still reckon he's a good guy

brilliant story tho bloody brilliant

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Snape is one of my favourite characters to write because there are so many unknowns! I too reckon he's a right bastard but will do the 'right' thing! Thanks for reading and reviewing! ~HH

Reviewer: WinterDragon
Date: 04/25/07 13:04
Chapter: Unwinding

heh whoot! normally i dont like snape/harry fics, but in this case i made an exception, and im glad i did! this was really well written and that dream scared the s**t out of me...i thought harry was actually dead! great job and you should do more stories!

Author's Response: Hee hee! Yeah, that dream scared the shite out of me too! Thanks for your review, and I do have more stories. Right now, most of them are archived at The Petulant Poetess but I will try to get some more across here.

Reviewer: moony101
Date: 03/16/07 16:54
Chapter: One

need to adjust margin sizes in page set up or something seeing as the left side of the page cannot easily be read and readers are left guessing at words

Author's Response: Really? I checked all five chapters in both Firefox and IE Ver 6.0.2900 and they appear to be fine. If you have that problem with other fics, maybe you can mention it to the people who maintain the archive. Thanks for reading. ~HH

Reviewer: Pendecardiel
Date: 01/17/07 14:19
Chapter: Unwinding

this is wonerful. i really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoyed the hell out of writing it! HH

Reviewer: sherbert_weirdone
Date: 12/31/06 20:42
Chapter: Unwinding

i think ur story is great, its brilliantly written and original, keep it up!!

Author's Response: Eek! Sorry I'm only now seeing this review.... damn Yahoo and email notifications!! Thanks so much for your review! HH

Reviewer: sherbert_weirdone
Date: 12/31/06 20:42
Chapter: Unwinding

i think ur story is great, its brilliantly written and original, keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Appreciate your review. HH

Reviewer: LaxCat
Date: 12/09/06 20:55
Chapter: One

you are a god!

I loved your story! It's the best fanfic i've ever seen (and I read a LOT of fanfics...).
the story have elements of BDSM, don't you think? Not many stoyes om mugglenet have that, unfortunately. ;)

Do you have more fanfics, on another site? 'Couse you are TOO good to only have written thise one.

I must say it again: you a god, you are THE best.
(i'm sorry for my bad english. I'm from Norway)

Author's Response: Thanks for that wonderful review! BDSM in the fic?? Oh hell yes there is! ;o) You can find most of my other stories at The Petulant Poetess. Here's a link to my author's page. HH

Reviewer: laverne
Date: 11/28/06 14:33
Chapter: Unwinding

HPSS ships are possibly the best fics out there, this one in particular. you are an amazing writer, and the incredible detail in this story is pretty much amazing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, laverne! I enjoy many ships and even though I was a bit slow in coming around to the idea of Harry and Severus, they're definitely one of my favourite pairings now! HH

Reviewer: _Sirius_Obsession_
Date: 11/17/06 18:48
Chapter: Unwinding

OMG YOU SCARED ME! I thought they were dead. I was like "WHAT NO! AHHH." But then I found out they werent and I was happy again.

This is really a great story, I absoloutly love it.

Author's Response: I know what you mean! When the muse whispered that whole 'Avada Kedavra' bit to me I freaked! ;o) Am happy you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing! HH

Reviewer: ManicObsessor
Date: 10/26/06 4:06
Chapter: Unwinding

Although I'm not a fan of this ship I thought it was great! You wrote it so well and I know it must be difficult to pull of a good Snarry story as the characters are just so hard to put together and make it seem believable.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I agree that it's a tough pairing if we try to keep them in character and I actually had a lot of difficulty doing just that. I'm so gratified that you enjoyed it! HH

Reviewer: JazeJaz
Date: 09/22/06 16:24
Chapter: Unwinding

This is a great stroy. More of these need to be written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your taking the time to read AND review! HH

Reviewer: DracoHermioneForever
Date: 09/04/06 19:11
Chapter: Unwinding

wtf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! um.. that was good written, but um... strange!! very strange!!! i would like to read more of your stories, but um.. without that!!! (snape and harry) keep up the good work though!!!!

Author's Response: Strange, eh? How so? Then again, the story is in the Category of Same-Sex pairings, and the outline mentions Snape and Harry with warnings of Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Slash, and Violence. That being said, if you knew it was Snarry, and you don't like Snarry, why read it? Thanks for the review anyway. HH

Reviewer: mrsponytail
Date: 09/04/06 18:27
Chapter: Unwinding


Author's Response: *hopes that's a good wow* Thanks for reading and reviewing! HH

Reviewer: Gildas
Date: 08/12/06 10:17
Chapter: Unwinding

That rocked!


You left nothing unsaid...


Author's Response: Ooooo.. thanks, Gildas. The first version of this was much more violent and much less gratifying, so I'm really pleased that the changes worked! Thanks for reading, reviews=lurve! HH

Reviewer: IwishIwas_Ginny
Date: 08/08/06 1:47
Chapter: Unwinding


Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the tale! HH

Reviewer: THE_wOrms
Date: 07/26/06 11:49
Chapter: Accusations


Author's Response: Thx.

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