omg tears tears tears love it
Beautiful. Just beautiful
... Wow. You captured the whole essence of the character's feelings REALLY well. I couldn't imagine reading a more well written story! I am pretty much speechless. This story was original, touching, and realistic as it could be! Wow.
Wonderful! The first truly original and moving fic I've read in quite a while! I look forward to reading more of your stories. 8/10
Wow. That had me bawling in a couple of places.... excellent.
Very good. I liked the part about the clock. I've always liked that clock. I even wrote and posted a poem about it. Again, great story.
great story, however if i remember right then it's not finished yet, in that case update soon! well done! :D
Just loved it! I don't like Percy much... but I do feel sorry that he died.
I really liked this story. I've been busy with my contest entry, too, and I haven't really had time to read the competition, but this was good. I think its interesting how you told it from Mrs. Weasley's point of view, when the easier thing to do would make it from one of her children's. I also really enjoyed you italicized the names. It really was very good symbolism. 10/10, definitely. Great job.